Heartsickness

Perhaps if I sleep
lamentation will vanish
like dew from dark violets
into the sun
leaving only the velvet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 8:53 PM
I love the imagery. Well done. Congrats on your win, Deborah.
Poteet Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Well-said, Deborah. Clear and flowing, properly melancholic, with a tinge of hope. Congrats on your placement.
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations Debora, fine work...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 8:46 AM
I want to dive into this piece, however melancholy, it is absolutely gorgeous. A fave for me, congratulations on your placement in the contest! xomo
Roper Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Deborah, congratulations on your win!
Raynes Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Congratulations Deborah, when sleep is the only escape we have, great write
Canerdy Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 7:58 PM
This is excellent. CONGRATS, Deborah!
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