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Heartsickness

Perhaps if I sleep lamentation will vanish like dew from dark violets into the sun leaving only the velvet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/2/2018 8:53:00 PM
I love the imagery. Well done. Congrats on your win, Deborah.
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Date: 3/1/2018 6:41:00 PM
Well-said, Deborah. Clear and flowing, properly melancholic, with a tinge of hope. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 2/28/2018 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations Debora, fine work...
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Date: 2/28/2018 8:46:00 AM
I want to dive into this piece, however melancholy, it is absolutely gorgeous. A fave for me, congratulations on your placement in the contest! xomo
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Date: 2/27/2018 8:58:00 PM
Deborah, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/27/2018 8:47:00 PM
Congratulations Deborah, when sleep is the only escape we have, great write
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Date: 2/27/2018 7:58:00 PM
This is excellent. CONGRATS, Deborah!
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