Hearts So Pure

#13 Motivational Series

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Hearts So Pure

I walk with the sun on my back, following my shadow
Across icy patches, eyes watering, from cold wind as I go
By snowbanks above my head on the sides of the street
Where pavement is shining wet, beneath my feet
Then I turn around, with the sun shining on my face
My shadow follows me, through this beautiful place
My heart beats with strength, as I walk up the long hill
Faith stronger than ever within me, to follow God’s will
To shine in the coldest places that I may forever arrive
To never give up on what I believe, to continue to strive

You can do this too, for we all have a shadow
But without learning from the sun, we wouldn’t know
How to overcome the darkness, we all may endure
The choice to love always reachable, in our hearts so pure!

Heidi Sands

2/17/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pederson Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 3:00 PM
your shadow says it all, that faith will follow you as your spirit attracts the shadow to guide you. you have such a nice way to flow and bring inspiration to me bless and hugs,
Sands Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 7:27 PM
I appreciate your kind feedback. Thank you so much Doug, Bless you ! :)
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Good guidance in your poem, Heidi..wonderful uplifting words. I especially liked the last stanza..so true..we may all endure..
Sands Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Thank you Vijay! :)
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February 17, 2019 at 2:36 PM
Profound and uplifting poem dearest, Heidi!
Sands Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Thank you Demetrios ! :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 1:09 PM
Shadows we may not be able to shake off but as we grow in strength we can make them fade and be less obvious. Well written Heidi. Tom.
Sands Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 1:14 PM
That is true. Thank you Tom :)
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February 17, 2019 at 12:42 PM
So lovely, Heidi! Janice
Sands Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Thank you Janice :)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 11:55 AM
What a beautiful, positive, uplifting poem, Heidi. Bravo!
Sands Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 12:19 PM
Thank you so much Caren! Have a nice day :)
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