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Hearts of Favor

The meadow flowers growing ever green, as winds do rush the hill and blow new seed. Within fall brush the feral pair conjoin, their tiny hearts do pulse a starting life. A youth of opposite seizes a straggler’s eye, no glaring or long courtship will they need, nor is there a need to consult mom or dad, for the paw or wing that attracts the gaze. Young hands touch while longing bright eyes embrace, with stares piercing deep into callow souls. An empty-silent-heart, pounds so vibrant, against hollow-beating-resonant walls. An implosion will soon erupt desire, releasing veins filled with flowing hot blood. The kiss upon sweet lips seals to bind hearts, in an enchanting-mesmerizing hold. Unlike the wild, ravenous, spicy love, the man is somewhat more tender and tame; however, wild-spicy comes much later when years of wedded bliss has been proclaimed. Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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Date: 2/20/2010 6:18:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Caryl. Some great descriptive lines in this one! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/18/2010 5:18:00 AM
Much kudos to you, Karyl, for participating in the “Mission Impossible! Blank Verse Brain Tease” Contest sponsored by: Deborah Guzzi. Entering was a challenging process. But you WON too! Congratulation! Drum Rolls!!! Yippee! I am happy for you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/17/2010 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your success Caryl, well done...Margaret
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Date: 2/17/2010 5:30:00 PM
very romantic, enjoyed reading today, congrats on placing in the contest!!
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Date: 2/17/2010 4:58:00 PM
You have me smiling with this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Deborah's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 2/17/2010 4:23:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your winning poem in the Mission Impossible contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write from a wonderful poet... thankxxx for your very special comments on all my poetry u were so gracious to read.. appreciated and lets both enjoy our win tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. my poem Crystallized won 4th place in this contest ...
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Date: 2/17/2010 3:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your pacement. Love, Joyce
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