Krish Radhakrishna Poet Tanka

Hearts In Diamonds

Go, run, hurry, chase,
Every jack, king queen and ace!
Crazy social race!!
Fate deals cards never the same!
Many playing a losing game!


Dated 21/02/2020
Tanaka poetry contest
Sponsor Jenish Somadas

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Line Gauthier February 22, 2020 at 3:58 PM Great poem, Krish. Krish Radhakrishna February 23, 2020 at 2:08 AM Thanks Line. Always nice to hear from you. Best wishes.

Charlie Smith February 22, 2020 at 2:17 PM Too many, well done Krish... Krish Radhakrishna February 22, 2020 at 2:32 PM Thanks Charlie, my friend! Much appreciated.

Sandra Adams February 22, 2020 at 8:30 AM this is so true to life, great metaphor... not everyone gets dealt a winning hand, some can turn it into one, others not so fortunate... wonderful penning Krish! hugs Krish Radhakrishna February 22, 2020 at 9:10 AM Thanks Sandra! Hugs from me!