Heart's Desire

Mother shook her head in deep despair of the new love I had found.
But Daddy said,” He’s not your type, he is seen all over town.”
I didn’t want to heed them, as I knew he had my heart.
I cried,  “I truly love him.  Please don’t tear us apart.”
I had romantic images of sitting by the fire.
Wrapped in my arms contentedly, he of my heart’s desire.
“You’re far too young”, said Mother, “To truly know your mind.”
And Daddy added, “Wait awhile, another love he’ll find.”
I couldn’t be dissuaded.  My folks at last agreed.
I begged them not to worry. There truly was no need.
They didn’t know their daughter had shrewdly hedged her bet.
To keep my love from straying, I’d taken him to the vet.



Entered in "Burlesque Twist" contest  Won First Place
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The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 4:44 PM
Joyce-Sorry for the delay in my comment-thank you so much for entering my contest-This one surprised me the most. You are awesome!!!
Brown Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 2:58 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's "Burlesque Twist" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 7:24 PM
Ohhhh thank the lord Joyce!! a kitty cat! yes mine is going to the vet soon! light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 7:13 PM
LOL well, then he was little good for you either ;) nice win joyce! Light & Love
Arowolo Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 4:55 PM
congratulation on your win,Joyce.keep winning...
Williams Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 3:50 PM
hey Joyce, congrats on your super dooper win David, thought i had already done this but maybe it did not get through....
Horne Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:12 AM
Many congratulations, Joyce : ) I knew this gem would be a big winner
Song Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 10:25 AM
Joyce, Simply brilliant burlesque...congrats on your win. Gwendolen
Susan Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 9:41 AM
So cute! a great play on words and peoples perceptions. congratulations on your win!
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 6:50 AM
OOO! I feel this. Well done Congratulations. Tony
Devonshire Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 12:35 AM
Hah!! Great twist at the end of this one. Don't have time to congratulate everyone, but so happy to see you at the top with another great writer, Chris Matt. Bravo and congratulations, dear Joyce! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 10:36 PM
Super congrats Joyce on your first place win my friend.. terrific piece..luv...
Poetess Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 9:49 PM
Joyce, I enjoyed this winning write. Congratulations on your first place win. ~Glenna
Jones Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 9:20 PM
burlesque fo sho! congrats!
Baity Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 10:20 PM
Clever write Joyce, very witty....best of luck in the contest....smiles...chiquita
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 6:20 PM
LOL, Wonderful funny write lovely Lady......good luck on contest...with love...old Jack
Horne Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 4:40 PM
LOL, I didn't see that coming! Clever write, my friend : )
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