Hearts Desire

The desires of our hearts twained tenderly,
found soaring upon a warm ocean breeze,
Where love is found in bloom,as sweet seedlings 
 spun  dreams upon looms -- Yes, weaver's weaves.

Our hearts dared dream of such pleasantries groomed,
within this place where none ear shall turn 'way ~
from golden lyrics drawn of lover's moon
Oh, that each mellow verse could last always...

Once, we have danced beneath star filled skies
 we shall watch the dawning of morning sun
drinking of its glory we'll share a sigh,
knowing, the early bird's yet too have sung...

No sweeter song's yoked between you and I
for you shall always be my Valentine...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
November 17, 2010 at 11:28 PM
Amazing sonnet! Love the images and the way you brought them to life. You have romance down to a science. Great Work!
K. Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 11:19 PM
This is such a sweet sonnet, that speaks so much love for your Valentine, Adell :) Really enjoyed the metaphors that you used here--it brings such romantic images to mind--thank you as well for your gracious comments on my writes :) glad you enjoyed them--have a fun day! --nikko :)
George   Avatar
April 7, 2010 at 6:13 AM
Extremely beautiful sonnet, dear Adell. Love, lainie
Canady Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 10:58 AM
The Lovliest Sentiments Expressed Here ... The Vocabulary Just Pulls Reader Into A Dream-Spun Imagery Of Joy and A Moment ... Wonderful Write On Romance ... MoonBee
Knop Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 5:53 AM
Great Valentine Sonnet, Adell! Thank you for sharing it with us and thank you for your comment..Keep writing! All the best...Gert
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 2:34 PM
What a sweet valentine sonnet, Adell!
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February 4, 2010 at 1:39 PM
You have me smiling with this poem. Thanks for the day brightener. Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
Loving Iii Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 1:28 PM
sweetly said. john h lovingiii
Hilliker Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 10:59 AM
Great Valentine's poem. Thanks for sharing.
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 6:24 AM
Was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Adell. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us. Love, Carol
Slaughter Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 7:25 PM
Ah...that was a moving poem. Enjoyed the read.
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