Heart's Bequest

My heart is placed upon the palm
Is outstretched, as well, to provide
May it be taken and then calmed
For it beats fast, where it resides

It beats so fast it sets the pace
It is controlled then by her touch
It changes beats, when seen her face
As she excites me just so much

I wait for her to hold it tight
As she then takes it to her breasts
For there my beating heart feels right 
With her heart, my heart is at rest

For this is where I dream to be
I cannot wait for night to see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 8/19/2008 8:53:00 AM
Nicely written. Beautiful sonnet. Vince
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Date: 8/16/2008 3:54:00 PM
Michael OHHHHHHHHHHH The passion pours out wonderfully done! Laura :) :)
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Date: 8/16/2008 3:52:00 PM
Loved this one, a happiness kind of poem that brings smiles to our faces. enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 8/16/2008 9:44:00 AM
This reads of so much happiness, Tom B. always told me "Happiness is the most important thing", he was so right...Always, Christy
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