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Hearts Afire

Clad in a negligee, I hear him whisper, “Come to me.”
Demurely I withdraw, but he rushes to me filled with passion.
Taking me in his arms, he kisses me, setting hearts afire.

Copyright © Carolyn Devonshire | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/7/2012 7:58:00 AM Congratulations to you on your win in Tracie 's "Sijo Kisses" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 2/7/2012 5:17:00 AM Well done sizzling stuff- ouch- LOL : ) Brenda Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/5/2012 9:32:00 PM Congrats on your win with this romantic sijo! Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 2/5/2012 9:02:00 AM Carolyn congrats on another superb win..David Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/5/2012 8:22:00 AM congrats Carolyn on a splendid second place win for these fiery hearts ablaze with poetic art luv.. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 2/5/2012 7:24:00 AM Now where's the fire extinguisher when ya need it...? i must say iv'e enjoyed this write Carolyn,, and how are you girl..? always thinking on you..Joe..) Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 2/5/2012 4:04:00 AM Wow Carolyn, its getting hot in here right now. love this, good luck in contest. harry Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/3/2012 7:40:00 AM AWawaWA....sIZZLING AND Grilling.....:) sO NICE TO BE ABLE TO MAKE IT HERE..AND READ YOUR BEAUTIFUL SWEET HEART MY DEAREST FRIEND.......Charma Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 2/2/2012 2:03:00 PM Wow, romantic and passionate piece, my friend Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 1/31/2012 12:40:00 PM Be still, old pacemaker! You have aged me at least 6 months with this one. "Come weez me to za Cazbah." Charles Boyer to someone, way back when. Love your passion. Love, daver Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 1/31/2012 5:49:00 AM you have said it all without resorting to high sounding phrases, jag Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 1/30/2012 9:02:00 PM Kisses are very hot in lover's arms set heart afire, lovely scene snapped with sweet words. Enjoyed and loved and wishing you all the best in the contest, bl Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/30/2012 8:49:00 PM oooh lalala. now I gotta get inspired and do one too!!!! Login to Reply

Deck Fitzgerald Date: 1/30/2012 6:29:00 PM An enjoyable sijo Carolyn thanks for sharing , Hugs Declan xx Login to Reply

Michele Ortiz Date: 1/30/2012 2:43:00 PM Very passionate. I love these types of poems :) Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 1/30/2012 2:31:00 PM What a special poem this one is Carolyn! I really love passion especially with romance! This one brings out both! Wonderful Work my friend!! Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 1/30/2012 12:59:00 PM Smile ˜ Yessss, most definitely I could see this wonderful moment occuring with a lady as beautiful as Your beautiful self, my dear beautiful Carolyn ˜ My love, Always, John!:) ˜ Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/30/2012 12:23:00 PM wonderful imagery to complete the scene in this enchanting entry for Tracie.. good luck Carolyn.. and thankxx for your message.. we continue to struggle with our health issues but continually share our creative spirits .. luv.. Login to Reply