Hearts Afire

Clad in a negligee, I hear him whisper, “Come to me.”
Demurely I withdraw, but he rushes to me filled with passion.
Taking me in his arms, he kisses me, setting hearts afire.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Tracie 's "Sijo Kisses" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Northeast Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 5:17 AM
Well done sizzling stuff- ouch- LOL : ) Brenda
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:32 PM
Congrats on your win with this romantic sijo! Blessings, Rhonda
Williams Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:02 AM
Carolyn congrats on another superb win..David
Sweetheart Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 8:22 AM
congrats Carolyn on a splendid second place win for these fiery hearts ablaze with poetic art luv..
Maverick Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 7:24 AM
Now where's the fire extinguisher when ya need it...? i must say iv'e enjoyed this write Carolyn,, and how are you girl..? always thinking on you..Joe..)
Horsman Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 4:04 AM
Wow Carolyn, its getting hot in here right now. love this, good luck in contest. harry
Chircop Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 7:40 AM
AWawaWA....sIZZLING AND Grilling.....:) sO NICE TO BE ABLE TO MAKE IT HERE..AND READ YOUR BEAUTIFUL SWEET HEART MY DEAREST FRIEND.......Charma
Horne Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 2:03 PM
Wow, romantic and passionate piece, my friend
Austin Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 12:40 PM
Be still, old pacemaker! You have aged me at least 6 months with this one. "Come weez me to za Cazbah." Charles Boyer to someone, way back when. Love your passion. Love, daver
Nair Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 5:49 AM
you have said it all without resorting to high sounding phrases, jag
Devnath  Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 9:02 PM
Kisses are very hot in lover's arms set heart afire, lovely scene snapped with sweet words. Enjoyed and loved and wishing you all the best in the contest, bl
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 8:49 PM
oooh lalala. now I gotta get inspired and do one too!!!!
Fitzgerald Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 6:29 PM
An enjoyable sijo Carolyn thanks for sharing , Hugs Declan xx
Ortiz Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 2:43 PM
Very passionate. I love these types of poems :)
Sivey Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 2:31 PM
What a special poem this one is Carolyn! I really love passion especially with romance! This one brings out both! Wonderful Work my friend!!
Rhinem Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Smile ˜ Yessss, most definitely I could see this wonderful moment occuring with a lady as beautiful as Your beautiful self, my dear beautiful Carolyn ˜ My love, Always, John!:) ˜
Sweetheart Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 12:23 PM
wonderful imagery to complete the scene in this enchanting entry for Tracie.. good luck Carolyn.. and thankxx for your message.. we continue to struggle with our health issues but continually share our creative spirits .. luv..
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