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Hearts Afire

Clad in a negligee, I hear him whisper, “Come to me.” Demurely I withdraw, but he rushes to me filled with passion. Taking me in his arms, he kisses me, setting hearts afire.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/7/2012 7:58:00 AM

Congratulations to you on your win in Tracie 's "Sijo Kisses" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 2/7/2012 5:17:00 AM

Well done sizzling stuff- ouch- LOL : ) Brenda

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/5/2012 9:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this romantic sijo! Blessings, Rhonda

David Williams

Date: 2/5/2012 9:02:00 AM

Carolyn congrats on another superb win..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/5/2012 8:22:00 AM

congrats Carolyn on a splendid second place win for these fiery hearts ablaze with poetic art luv..

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/5/2012 7:24:00 AM

Now where's the fire extinguisher when ya need it...? i must say iv'e enjoyed this write Carolyn,, and how are you girl..? always thinking on you..Joe..)

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/5/2012 4:04:00 AM

Wow Carolyn, its getting hot in here right now. love this, good luck in contest. harry

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/3/2012 7:40:00 AM

AWawaWA....sIZZLING AND Grilling.....:) sO NICE TO BE ABLE TO MAKE IT HERE..AND READ YOUR BEAUTIFUL SWEET HEART MY DEAREST FRIEND.......Charma

Jack Horne

Date: 2/2/2012 2:03:00 PM

Wow, romantic and passionate piece, my friend

Daver Austin

Date: 1/31/2012 12:40:00 PM

Be still, old pacemaker! You have aged me at least 6 months with this one. "Come weez me to za Cazbah." Charles Boyer to someone, way back when. Love your passion. Love, daver

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/31/2012 5:49:00 AM

you have said it all without resorting to high sounding phrases, jag

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/30/2012 9:02:00 PM

Kisses are very hot in lover's arms set heart afire, lovely scene snapped with sweet words. Enjoyed and loved and wishing you all the best in the contest, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 8:49:00 PM

oooh lalala. now I gotta get inspired and do one too!!!!

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 1/30/2012 6:29:00 PM

An enjoyable sijo Carolyn thanks for sharing , Hugs Declan xx

Michele Ortiz

Date: 1/30/2012 2:43:00 PM

Very passionate. I love these types of poems :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/30/2012 2:31:00 PM

What a special poem this one is Carolyn! I really love passion especially with romance! This one brings out both! Wonderful Work my friend!!

John Rhinem

Date: 1/30/2012 12:59:00 PM

Smile ˜ Yessss, most definitely I could see this wonderful moment occuring with a lady as beautiful as Your beautiful self, my dear beautiful Carolyn ˜ My love, Always, John!:) ˜

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 12:23:00 PM

wonderful imagery to complete the scene in this enchanting entry for Tracie.. good luck Carolyn.. and thankxx for your message.. we continue to struggle with our health issues but continually share our creative spirits .. luv..