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Heartburn

Heading home from Susie's Diner, Everyone says there's no finer. All think Susie's sizzlin' dinners Really rate as wondrous winners. There we had the chili cheese fries, Butterfinger shakes, and fried pies-- Utter Heaven then, but--UH OH! Rumbling gases threaten--OH, NO! Now let's fix a great big bromo! entered in Frank Herrera's Let Your Hair Down Contest January 9, 2017

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Date: 8/28/2016 3:03:00 PM
Great rhyming on this cute little piece!:)... I guess maybe I'm lucky I have a sensitive stomach and stay away from most "heartburn" foods...thanks for laugh today!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/28/2016 3:58:00 PM
Glad you got a kick out of the poem. Thank you, Chris! Janice
Date: 8/26/2016 6:01:00 PM
Thanks Janice. Now I'm hungry for chili cheese fries. Love the humor as always.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/26/2016 8:41:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel. You're very supportive. Janice
Date: 8/26/2016 2:58:00 PM
Good one! Enjoyable, and without the aftereffects!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/26/2016 8:41:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! Janice

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