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Couple, Romance, Love, Kiss, Lovers, Bench, Sunset

Heartbroken Love


My lost love
   makes me lonely and longing
heartbroken and heartsick
         in need of healing
but wait, wandering wayfarer girl
                     wait . . . 
new found love is looking right 
            at you all lovey-dovey  !

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March 20, 2022

Poetry/Alliteration/Heartbroken Love
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1441-139-20
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest,  My Lost and Found Love
sponsor, JCB Brul, Judged 04/21/2022

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 8:31 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Constance. Change can be good after sadness. Blessings xxoo
La France Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 1:41 PM
Connie, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment ~Constance
Alex Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 9:06 PM
Interesting to ask the wayfarer girl wait. Beautiful. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 3:44 PM
Hello Constance, if the cupid aimed the arrows right it should be the true love. Love & Friendship. Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Hello Constance, I am enjoying my morning coffee now. You are welcome. Friendship & Love. Darlene
La France Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for the visit and comment ~Constance
Leffanta Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 11:59 AM
Well caught and done! I hope Deb reads this! Aloha!
La France Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 2:56 PM
Rico, thank you so much for the compliment ~Constance
Goff Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 4:57 PM
Dismay then joy, nice!
La France Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 2:57 PM
Jim, thank you so much for the comment and compliment ~Constance
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 3:59 PM
beautiful in its sadness but with hope at the ending:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 2:57 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the visit and comment, hugs ~Constance
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