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Halcyon, Heartbroken, House Words Sponsored by: Constance La France

"Heart heals with time, but it never forgets the memories you've made or how it felt when you embraced and loved those we lost." Quote by poet Heartbroken. I sit, my back against my headboard. Sun sears out in a haze of throbbing pain. Out the window, I vacantly stare, oblivious to the fleeting of the world. My thoughts off in a dream, as clouds move along a flyway with the bird's migration. By your side and sedated my soul longs to be. Innocent. Bathing in the scent strawberries and warm cream. Observing the leaves and shadows pirouette under the trees. Etched still caresses as once we embraced. A heartbroken stillness I grasp. Cursing the ambience of our room; you will never be coming back, but you live on in my heart.

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Date: 10/20/2023 12:53:00 PM
Eve, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the quote and music, Constance
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Date: 10/12/2023 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What an amazing write. Love your ending, So True... Love/pain go together.  Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 10/8/2023 6:52:00 AM
Heart breaking indeed... we never get over the loss of a loved one, especially someone we spent so much time with and who was a wonderful person.. God rest his soul.. your poem is touching and written with a lot of emotions... bless you my friend.
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Date: 10/8/2023 1:46:00 AM
once I had such a love. She's dead now. No doubt my wife takes precedence, but memories of my first love remain. You did well Eve. A poem we all relate to somehow. Blessings
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