Ann Gilmour Poet Rhyme

Heartbroken

another Mother's day to bear
~
My son
    he died
~
His mum
  I cried
~

    Without you son
           I feel so sad ~~   
                           
                                 I call your name
                                      but you're not there ~~
                                                                      
                                                                   a broken heart
                                                                         cannot repair ~~~
                       without you son
                           there is no one
                        
no hugs
no smiles
no voice I hear

to lose my son I’ll ne’er recover
~~~
no Darling Boy to call me Mother…



Written 13th March 2021 ~  the second Mothering Sunday without my Son...

Contest All Yours (Mar 14)
Sponsor Brian Strand
FIRST PLACE 

Contest 'H' contest
Sponsor Constance La France 
FIRST PLACE

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Paula Goldsmith September 11, 2021 at 10:08 AM WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful yet very sad story/write. I am so very sorry. I cried when reading this. Have a very blessed day/weekend with hugs............... Ann Gilmour September 13, 2021 at 1:36 PM Aww bless you dear Paula and thank you ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Regina Mcintosh September 9, 2021 at 5:25 PM so very sad... I feel for you. So sorry. God bless you and Congrats on your win. Love, Gina Ann Gilmour September 13, 2021 at 1:20 PM Thank you so much dear Regina ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Kim Rodrigues September 9, 2021 at 5:54 AM Heartbreaking indeed… Congratulations! Ann Gilmour September 13, 2021 at 1:19 PM Bless you dear Kim and thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France September 8, 2021 at 9:25 PM Ann, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your beautiful poem ~ love and serenity _Constance Ann Gilmour September 9, 2021 at 2:48 AM Dear Constance, many thanks for my win in your contest. I am loving the different contests you are running and it is almost like you have become a female Brian, as they are so popular and rightly so... Thank you for all your time dear Constance. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Christuraj Alex September 8, 2021 at 9:04 PM Indeed, a sad story. This is beautifully depicted in selected simple meaningful words. Beautiful poem. Congratulations! Ann Gilmour September 9, 2021 at 3:04 AM Bless you dear Christuraj and thanks dear friend... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Reason A. Poteet September 8, 2021 at 6:31 PM So well-written an emotional piece detailing a time that is difficult in so many ways. Well done, Ann. Ann Gilmour September 9, 2021 at 3:06 AM Yes, it will be 2 years in October that my son was taken so suddenly at just 49, and the hurt will never go away... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Gordon Mcconnell March 16, 2021 at 2:19 PM So sad Ann, I like how you designed this piece, it very original but must be extremely difficult to cope with especially on Sunday past and show great courage in putting your thoughts on paper. Blessings always, Gordon Ann Gilmour March 16, 2021 at 5:47 PM Yes it was a tearful experience, but somehow by putting my feelings into words was cathartic in a strange way. Thank you dear Gordon for your kind words my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios March 15, 2021 at 9:07 AM I do feel your pain,dearest Ann! A huge loss, it must be. Love,Pangie and Irene ^*^ Ann Gilmour March 16, 2021 at 10:34 AM Bless you Panagiota your kind words mean a lot to me my friend. With kindest thoughts and hugs to you both ^*^ xx from Ann xx

Rico Leffanta March 14, 2021 at 11:53 AM I recall how my mother suffered the loss of her children and remain grateful my children outlived their mother! Aloha! Rico Ann Gilmour March 15, 2021 at 6:44 AM Many thanks Rico, so sad to hear of your mothers loss. I appreciate your visit - thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sara Kendrick March 14, 2021 at 7:04 AM I feel your grief. Time will heal but it takes time and probably a longer time in your situation. I can't say that I understand what you are going through because I still have my three children with me here on this earth.Congrats on your winner. Sara Ann Gilmour March 15, 2021 at 6:41 AM Thank you so much dear Sara and I really appreciate your kind words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar March 14, 2021 at 12:53 AM My wife would have loved Mother's Day. Four years now. Time flies. We relate in different ways. Ann Gilmour March 15, 2021 at 6:38 AM Yes dear Victor how time flies.. God bless your dear wife...with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier March 13, 2021 at 9:01 PM O Ann ~ I can't begin to imagine your pain. This is such a poignant poem. Hugs xx Ann Gilmour March 15, 2021 at 6:36 AM Dearest Line thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison March 13, 2021 at 12:11 PM aww Ann such a heartbreaking poem, days like Mother's day must be so difficult for you my friend. thinking of you. sending big hugs Jan xx Ann Gilmour March 13, 2021 at 12:38 PM Bless you dear Jan and thank you. Mother's Day reminds me that I will never be called "Mum" again and it breaks my heart, but I do feel he is watching over me with my dear husband and that gives me great comfort. I hope you have a lovely Mother's Day and thank you for your kind words Jan. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit March 13, 2021 at 11:53 AM How sad I feel, reading these verses of mother's love! Elegant are the emotions you express--every parent can relate and nobody can forget. Wishing you much peace, Ann, as time goes by. Ann Gilmour March 13, 2021 at 12:32 PM Bless you dear Vijay for your kind words of comfort my friend. it doesn't get any easier as time goes on, but I am able to think about many good memories that lift my spirit and put a smile on my face, then there are times when something reminds me of that terrible day... I thank you Vijay and hope you are keeping safe and well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx