Heartbeats On Pas De Deux

HEARTBEATS ON PAS FE DEUX Starstruck by your smile as I opened my eyes Snow-white cheeks glows to peaches sweet Running fingertip to heart shaped lips As spring breeze kiss, I am a lady longing to grow Fear a lost shadow because warmth flows With your presence alone, I am soppy blown You bestow me a new life within a universe that's dark Walk with me, don't you depart Let's decorate views: a tapestry of you and me Man ... how quick you boil my fire Your heart thumps a crystal chime choir Cushioned pleased from your musky scent Words weak and not needed for us to speak Beside the hearth, let's dance our anthem real slow as our heartbeats jive in a pas de deux If by chance you catch my eye I hope for you to see our sparkles high... Our footwork a unison graceful cruise Two become one in this dance we choose Best given as we don't wanna to lose © O. E. Guillermo October 24, 2014; 10:27pm ***Inspired by the poem made by James Fraser: THE FONDER OF YOU ***PAS DE DEUX (French, literally "step of two") is a dance duet in which two dancers, typically a male and a female, perform ballet steps together. The pas de deux is characteristic of classical ballet and can be found in many well-known ballets, including Sleeping Beauty, Swan Lake, and Giselle.
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Date: 10/30/2014 12:14:00 PM
I know that this lady who is longing to grow has already grown in many aspects of life. I hope that this beautiful imaginative romantic poem will lead to dreams becoming reality. // hugs paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 8:16:00 PM
I am praying that too Paul.. :) and I never stop too until I came to that point anyhow whenever that will be I hope and pray it will be all fine.. :) I believe God makes all things in the right time.. He permits all in right time perhaps still He is still preparing me for that person whoever he is and that person too.. :)! hope i don't sound sourgraping.. :D!
Date: 10/26/2014 11:55:00 PM
No, Olive, I am from India. I have just added the poem to my fav list. Your poems are bundles of joy, always. Much love xxxxx rajat
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/27/2014 6:14:00 AM
aha.. that's why the second to fifth time I read your name i want to make a second guess.. :) thanks much Rajat.. happy festival of lights.. :)
Date: 10/26/2014 8:51:00 PM
One knows they've found good love when the meaning of who they are is enhanced, and emboldened by the vibrant connection Olive. This poem reminds me of such beauty. I love dancing, espicially improvised, however, Flamenco, and rythmic gymnastics are my favorite. I'm sure Martha Graham would be inspired by this lovely vision and soul Olive...J.A.B.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/27/2014 6:17:00 AM
rhythmic gymnastics seems not into you.. :)by your looks though but with regardd to your poetrt well it does show that passion, energy and flexibility thanks for the genetous comments always.. :)
Date: 10/26/2014 12:11:00 PM
such a creative way to use that french expression in your poem, two hearts dancing with love!! It's a beautiful dance you describe, dear!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/26/2014 7:53:00 PM
:)thanks much Andie.. :)
Date: 10/26/2014 9:58:00 AM
Visions such visions as I read through your poem Olive. The more I read, I feel like I'm dancing form word to word, and it gets better with every read. When I view such poetry, it's no wonder that your my favourite poet here. You have a gift, and it simply gets better and better. Hence I intend to follow your progress and watch you excel. Wonderful to read, again and again - James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/26/2014 7:52:00 PM
:) thanks James.. your poem by the way inspired me.. :D! thanks..
Date: 10/26/2014 9:03:00 AM
wow olive what a powerful piece of writing dear friend beautifully penned
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/26/2014 7:50:00 PM
thanks much Liam.. :) I appreciate it .. :)
Date: 10/26/2014 7:21:00 AM
Perfectly synchronous set of hearts. L' poème magnifique. Love...rajat
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/26/2014 7:50:00 PM
thanks much Rajat where you from :O Mexico?? a guess?
Date: 10/26/2014 6:07:00 AM
A stunning piece. A pleasure to read.
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Date: 10/26/2014 7:48:00 PM
thanks much Maurice.. :) your comment is a pleasure to read as well. :)
Date: 10/26/2014 4:12:00 AM
- Olive, what beautiful poem :) - A poem that pleases me to read - Even though it is early morning it makes me dance :) - Thank you my friend - Have a nice Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2014 7:47:00 PM
thanks much Anne Lise.. :)
Date: 10/25/2014 9:47:00 AM
A beautiful piece Olive...hugs Tim
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Date: 10/26/2014 7:44:00 PM
thanks Tim for your beautiful comment. :)
Date: 10/24/2014 11:28:00 PM
This is truly wonderful my dear friend Olive! I loved and enjoyed reading it. I love ballet/pas de deux and I love your poem so much! Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/26/2014 7:44:00 PM
Thanks Leonora.. :) Your comments are encouraging.. :) I saw one dance with this and I felt every move and sway. :)
Date: 10/24/2014 3:46:00 PM
Dancing words for sure!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/26/2014 5:12:00 AM
Thanks much Dan.. :)
Date: 10/24/2014 1:30:00 PM
Ahh!! Way to go with this beautiful work..Enjoyed reading and learning..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/25/2014 10:14:00 PM
thanks Sara. :)
Date: 10/24/2014 11:20:00 AM
And so beautifully written Olive. I especially enjoyed reading the third stanza.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/25/2014 8:08:00 AM
thanks Brenda.. :
Date: 10/24/2014 10:32:00 AM
wow your words simply dance off the page - a divine write Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/25/2014 8:08:00 AM
Thanks much Jan.. :D
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