Heart-Attack

There are frozen furrows in the Earth where
the plow made love to Terra.
It looks so pitiful in the dead of winter, with
no vegetable detritus on the ground to attest to any
kind of harvest. 

For control over the forces of nature,
many have struck a blade into the earth and ruptured her
trust in spring. They say that when your cart is full of corn, it
is easy to counsel frugality to your neighbors.

This would have been a killing field, had the seeds been planted.
Had control been granted.

But it is icy.
Here the weak sun is rising to cast its pall light 
on the scape where the would-be prometheus collapsed,
and his ventricles ceased to allow his defiance of the
Gods.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 3, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Geoffery. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2010 at 6:07 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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May 28, 2010 at 6:59 PM
Geoffery -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj
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May 25, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Geoffrey. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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May 24, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Loved this Geoffrey - you described the bleakness of winter well. Many congrats on your feature. Rgds Janette
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May 23, 2010 at 4:05 PM
The vivid imagery carries your thoughts in a creative way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
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November 7, 2009 at 12:27 PM
love the style in your writes--Charma
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October 9, 2009 at 5:00 AM
Love it and thank you for commenting on my poem
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October 7, 2009 at 10:51 PM
You seem to be an "out of the box" thinker. I like that. Great piece. Donna
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October 7, 2009 at 12:59 AM
Geoffrey, this is AWESOME! Very powerful thought evoking writing. BRILLIANT! Love, Lainie
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October 6, 2009 at 6:13 PM
I like this as well as all your works...Thanks Marty
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October 6, 2009 at 6:03 PM
That is quite a field Geoffery.It sounds like it could give one a heart-attack....Must have been a strong man indeed. Good Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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October 6, 2009 at 4:37 PM
Sounds like a strong man that had worked those fields. Keep writing. Sara
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