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Heartache

Translucent living Signs of a screaming wild man Brought forth thru glimmering shades Skull larger than norm Primitive style of lost life Strangeness etches from his loins Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2012 11:23:00 AM

very interesting one, Russell. wish I could see a lot more of yours, just can hardly keep up this weekend.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2012 6:56:00 PM

VERY DEEP AND DRAMATIC TONES RESONATE IN THIS POEM RUSSELL LUV .. EXCEPTIONAL THOUGHTS PAINT A VIVID PICTURE .. WONDROUS WORK OF ART MY FRIEND ..LUV..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 4:03:00 PM

Hello Russell, strange the wild man... i wonder what was in his hands... always~ pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2012 3:43:00 PM

Interesting work..Got a chuckle..It was as if I was looking through a shade on an apartment window of this strange man..Thanks for stopping by..A Brown Thrasher is a bird in fact the Georgia State Bird..I wrote a blog with some pictures..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 11/10/2012 3:30:00 PM

Deep and profound, Love Constance

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2012 3:29:00 PM

love this clever write, Russell

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/10/2012 10:30:00 AM

Wow my friend creative write.. very enjoyed...Michael