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Heartache

Translucent living
Signs of a screaming wild man
Brought forth thru glimmering shades
Skull larger than norm
Primitive style of lost life
Strangeness etches from his loins

Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

November 11, 2012 at 11:23 AM

very interesting one, Russell. wish I could see a lot more of yours, just can hardly keep up this weekend.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 10, 2012 at 6:56 PM

VERY DEEP AND DRAMATIC TONES RESONATE IN THIS POEM RUSSELL LUV .. EXCEPTIONAL THOUGHTS PAINT A VIVID PICTURE .. WONDROUS WORK OF ART MY FRIEND ..LUV..

Poet Destroyer A

November 10, 2012 at 4:03 PM

Hello Russell, strange the wild man... i wonder what was in his hands... always~ pd

Sara Kendrick

November 10, 2012 at 3:43 PM

Interesting work..Got a chuckle..It was as if I was looking through a shade on an apartment window of this strange man..Thanks for stopping by..A Brown Thrasher is a bird in fact the Georgia State Bird..I wrote a blog with some pictures..Sara