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- Heart Truth -

Threatening predators have a nose for fear
Frantic anxiety, mixes with your own body scent
The sick anxiety that can paralyze
glue yourself in a viscous oil sludge
In this suffocating fragrance 
the fireflies dance in the dark
as flash of lightning

Are you sleeping ?
I was somewhere there
Dreams play a many different experience
This dreams that bent me to my knees this night,
was blown away underneath a moonlit cloud

I am on a journey through ever deeper layers in my heart
It requires courage and vulnerability
The wisdom of the heart helps us to navigate
Always let your heart show the true path
Believe it and you will see

A luminous beauty creeps up the hillside
Veiled dew drops, shines like diamonds
All I own are roses in my heart
A beautiful morning sun curved like a bird's wing

Imagine if we could say like the Roman poet Horace:

     "Come tomorrow's torments, come
             - It was today -  I lived! "












06/08/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Heart Truth Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke
2nd place in the contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 2:47 AM
Anne you always paint a hopeful picture with your soothing words. This one heals distressed hearts for sure. Congratulations on your win :) Much love!
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 4:50 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit, lovely comment and your congratulations, Aditi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watt Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 10:46 AM
Thank you for taking us down into the deeper layers, Anne-Lise. "Always let your heart show the true path" - Amen! Beautifully told, and I love the ending quote. Hugs ~ John
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 12:11 PM
- John, thank you very much for your visit, lovely comment and your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 11:58 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, this poem is well done i like what it says . i am making it my fav. Hugs Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 11:05 AM
hello Sunshine Smile, yes i mad it my fav. I am glad tatthis makes you happy. enjoy your day my friend. hugs Darlene.
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 12:16 PM
- Very grateful for your fave, Darlene :) - Make me happy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Hi my dear soul sister, this poem is heartfelt and has a great deal of emotion - it is truly thought provoking - a great quote you chose to further explain your poem 'Come tomorrow's torments, come - It was today I lived' by the Roman poet Horace. - fantastic write Sunshine Smile, Best of luck with the contest. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 11:57 AM
- I got a 2nd place in the contest, dear sister Jenny ... glad you enjoyed this, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" Today is all we have. We can only dream about tomorrow. I love your stone hearts. Enjoy your win and day.................
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 10:19 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, comment and congrats Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 6:38 AM
Wonderful words with welcome whimsical wiles. God bless you with a win :)
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:38 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 11:59 AM
A strong emotional write and well expressed my friend. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:38 AM
- Thank you very much Phyllis, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 10:44 AM
This is a Beautiful expression, my friend
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:38 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 9:53 AM
I so agree with you we need to live for today, and be brave enough when we get scathed, to dreams dreams of goodness and love. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, May your sunshine last forever in your heart, blooming roses at will. xo
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:37 AM
- Pixie, thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 6:16 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, this excellent poem reads like a winner to me. The emotions are strong and your words paint such vivid visions. Wishing you well in the contest. I love the depth and content of this write. Have a wonderful Friday. Lve and Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:37 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Exceptional writing that touches the heart and mind dearest, Anne-Lise. Good luck my friend. Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:36 AM
- Thank you very much Demetrios, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 5:02 AM
Deep and so true, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:36 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ermine Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 3:33 PM
I think you extrapolated Horace's striking warning and zeal into this poem brilliantly. So much agonising and exuberant language to express love's torturous desire. (with a lot of required optimism)
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:36 AM
- Sigrid, thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 2:39 PM
A very deep and thought provoking verse Anne. Love the quote at the end. Good luck. Tom
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:35 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 1:15 PM
I knew you were sentimental! You really wrote something powerful here. I'm sure it will win whatever you might enter.
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:35 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 1:05 PM
A wonderful poem Anne-Lise..so many lovely lines:...The wisdom of the heart helps us to navigate...All I own are roses in my heart..A winning poem you wrote.
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:34 AM
- Thank you very much Vijay, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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