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Heart To Brain

Thinking you do and send me commands, Muscular I can pump to the whole Without a single miss day through night, Why should I ever listen to you, When might is always right !! Sponsor - Andrea Dietrich Contest - third and final itty bitty contest

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Carrie Richards

Date: 4/16/2014 1:06:00 PM

This one is so clever, a unique theme for the contest ! I wish I had written it ! :) Good luck!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/17/2014 1:11:00 AM

Thnx for such beautiful n encouraging comments Carrie ! Feeling honored !

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/14/2014 8:24:00 AM

ohh, the power of personal ideals.. a strong voice here, dr. urma.. huggs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/17/2014 1:12:00 AM

Thanks for passing by Nettie !

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/12/2014 7:56:00 PM

wiles work as well, can you hold a frying pan [that's a good bit of might, given the advantage of surprise :0] Light & Love

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/17/2014 1:13:00 AM

Yes u r right Debbie ! Thanks for passing by !

Jack Horne

Date: 4/12/2014 3:54:00 PM

clever write here indeed

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/17/2014 1:14:00 AM

Thanks for ur valuable comments Jack !

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2014 5:35:00 AM

This is so good DR>!! Such a hearty consideration :) gl in contest // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/12/2014 6:30:00 AM

Much appreciate the visit n the like ! Thanks Paul !!!