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Gentling hues bless my hungry soul
Dazzling sensations who make me whole
Fragments of joy, shards of my muse
Bless my hungry soul, gentling hues

Darkness falls down, like autumn leaves
Bestowing compassion for one who believes
His light is alive in stars, the night’s crown
Like autumn leaves, darkness falls down

Shadows flowing, reflecting all my dreams
Liquid oasis, secrets in beautiful themes
Wonders alive as my love keeps growing
Reflecting all my dreams, shadows flowing

Like the breathless wind, nuzzling my cheek
Joy in shades of grace silence every critique
Mystery and hope mixed together, combined
Nuzzling my cheek, like the breathless wind

Without the Lord above, I’d be lost in dread
It was for my redemption that He came and bled
His grace brought me peace and abiding love
I’d be lost in dread without the Lord above






2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 15
Mark Toney
October 2, 2022

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/8/2022 9:57:00 AM

Dear Gina, your golden pen shines with amazing rhythm and rhymes and spiritual beauty in this prayerful poem. Your exquisite poem leaves me breathless, my sweet friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Mark Toney

Date: 10/7/2022 11:16:00 AM

A very inspiring poem of thanksgiving, Gina. Reversing the first and fourth lines of each stanza adds to the prayerful aspect. Congratulations on your win on Mile 15 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 16 has already started. Also, check out my blog post to view your current standing in the Marathon.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/6/2022 10:03:00 AM

Truly Gina, we would be "lost in dread" without our Savior. Your beautiful poem is chock full of vibrant images and reflections of your journey of faith! Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the fellowship in poetry! Isn't it wonderful that this ministry can reach so many hearts? Sending you prayers, blessings and a hug my friend!