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Heart Relationships

The person who does not fall down with the eyes even by lying. Those people are very close to our heart. We also make mistakes with their sardines. Because our relationship with them is never weak. This love is our answer to their hatred and concern. After which they will became themselves one day or a day of shame.

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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 1/15/2018 6:03:00 PM

This is certainly an interesting take on Life. Everyone reads words differently; someone here posed their opinion, "it is all subjective", i.e. different people will interpret your words the way they are reading your poem (the way they are thinking, feeling your words). I like the use of the word Sardines. "We also make mistakes with their sardines", I like it. Can you please explain Kishan, what you are conveying with that line? I love this poem.

Kishan Sharma
Date: 1/15/2018 9:38:00 PM

Hi dear Leanne Lovejoy I only conveying my poem from in my heart and my love feeling mix it ,