H-E-A-R-T of L-O-V-E

Oh how I love you.
             Cherishing each moment,
            for you have opened             
           my heart with your
           everlasting and precious 
            love. Yet so tender;                  .uoy evol I woh hO
            You place God                   ,tnemom hcae gnihsirehC
             first in your life. And                 denepo evah uoy rof
              I love you more for that.              ruoy htiw traeh ym
                Hold on to the other           suoicerp dna gnitsalreve
                  half of my heart,                   ;rednet os teY .evol
                    for one day we                           doG ecalp uoY
                      Shall put them                 dnA .efil ruoy ni tsrif
                        Together                .taht rof erom uoy evol I   
                          As one                     rehto eht ot no dloH   
                            With                          ,traeh ym fo flah
                               God.                        ew yad eno rof
                                                            meht tup llahS
                                                                  rehtegoT
                                                                   eno sA
                                                                    htiW
                                                                 .doG 

Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

05-20-2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 11:23 PM
So creative, ,lufituaeb oS
Ink-U-Script Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Thank you for stopping by!
Inman Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 11:24 PM
Great to read this again.
Sergi Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Very unique imagery of love!
Dutta Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 11:08 PM
A New Venture. Interesting. Blessing
Johnson Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 6:21 AM
Lovely and very creative. <3 :)
Bangalee Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 9:29 PM
realty realty great
Inman Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 8:40 PM
Great words and sentiment and a wonderful, wonderful layout.
Cab Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 6:54 PM
I have to agree with Margaret very well done. I never saw something like it. Keep up the great work.
Franceschini Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 6:22 PM
magnificent! that's all I can say
Bialczak Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 5:57 PM
I really love not only the words but the way you have the poem set up. Nice!
Hoffman Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Beautifully written piece and your structuring is brilliant.
Staton Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Very nice! Yes, God has to come first in all things!
Williams Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Very Artistic.
Wilae Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 6:08 PM
What an amazing form!
Rodd Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 9:20 AM
clever!!!
Williams Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 12:40 PM
Beautiful...
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 9:11 PM
It’s wonderful. How did you do it!
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 9:07 PM
I like your poetry. I have a question How did you get to shape your poetry on the computer? Is it difficult?
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 6:45 PM
Hello Have a nice evening my friend.Pace Ink -U-Script, well i will tell you that you did very well with this poem.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 10:11 PM
Hello Darlene...I really appreciate your comment. :) It was pretty difficult especially with me being a perfectionist.
Fleming Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 2:54 AM
I applaud your obvious intelligence...This piece of enterprising prose is certainly very cleverly constructed. Nicely done, Pace - A seven for original thought and painstaking endeavour! My best regards. :) john
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 4:42 AM
Wow, your comment left me speechless...I really appreciate it!!!!
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 3:54 AM
wow...what a wonderful poem.. and the half hearts that waiting to re-unite, i say RE-UNITE :) are awesome..love and peace my friend :))
De La Luna Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 5:42 AM
awesome, awesome write, Pace! i love the shape and most of all the sentiments in your words. that is a very beautiful love.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Amazing. I love this. Love and prayers, Gina
Canama Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 9:53 PM
This is artistically honed and wonderfully written... Thank you, for sharing!
Anish Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 3:53 PM
What a fine shape poem! kudos on it! Matthew Anish
Smith Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 3:00 PM
Woah...you stopped me in my tracks...you wowwed me with your picture and held me with your content..........Tim
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