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As life plays out in slow motion, we learn to make use of free will, gently calming thought commotion, poised in the void, tranquil and still, feeling complete, with bliss replete. Sipping the divine bliss potion, by night and day thus, to heart’s fill, soul, a wave, becomes the ocean, as love and light, God does instil, in timeless time, by touch sublime. 31-May-2022 HMS, Rhymezone Posie Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Ann Peck

Date: 7/5/2022 4:14:00 PM

A very lovely poem, Seeker ~ sipping the divine bliss potion ~ gorgeous. Congratulations on your win!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/5/2022 6:09:00 PM

Thank you, Ann, so happy you enjoyed! I was surprised with the win too :)

Valsa George

Date: 7/1/2022 10:03:00 PM

"soul, a wave, becomes the ocean, as love and light, God does instil,"..... What an ocean of meaning in this wave of thought ! Congratulations Seeker friend on your trophy win !

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/1/2022 11:08:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa :)

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/1/2022 2:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Emile's contest with your thought provoking lines, Seeker.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/1/2022 11:07:00 PM

Thank you, Jenna ~ seems it turned out well!

Robert James Liguori

Date: 6/30/2022 8:07:00 PM

well done. I enjoyed your poem.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/30/2022 8:51:00 PM

Thank you, Robert! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/30/2022 12:29:00 PM

Congrats on this winner in Emile's contest. Way to go. Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/30/2022 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, Sara! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/30/2022 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Today, be blessed with your win...........

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/30/2022 6:45:00 PM

Thank you dear Paula! :)

Terry Flood

Date: 6/30/2022 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations on you top billing, Unseeking. I’m not a ‘Goddy’ person but it was a lovely write and ‘divine bliss potion’ did instil in me pleasant thoughts of a cool G&T. Terry

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/30/2022 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, Terry! Delighted you enjoyed

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/30/2022 10:37:00 AM

Congrats friend. God bless you :) Love, Gina

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/30/2022 6:43:00 PM

Thank you, Gina! I was surprised too!

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/30/2022 9:39:00 AM

Congratulations Unseeking! Your enlightening poem earned “First” place in my contest. This was a very challenging contest but your poem rose to the top of my list, well done my friend, Emile.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/30/2022 9:51:00 AM

Thank you, Emile! This is indeed a pleasant surprise, since my poems are more about the message, with lesser emphasis on vocabulary or style. I’m honoured by the recognition :)