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Heart Lotus Blooms

As life plays out in slow motion,
we learn to make use of free will,
gently calming thought commotion,
poised in the void, tranquil and still,
feeling complete,
with bliss replete.

Sipping the divine bliss potion,
by night and day thus, to heart’s fill,
soul, a wave, becomes the ocean,
as love and light, God does instil,
in timeless time,
by touch sublime.

31-May-2022

HMS, Rhymezone

Posie Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Emile Pinet 

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Ann Peck July 5, 2022 at 4:14 PM A very lovely poem, Seeker ~ sipping the divine bliss potion ~ gorgeous. Congratulations on your win! Unseeking Seeker July 5, 2022 at 6:09 PM Thank you, Ann, so happy you enjoyed! I was surprised with the win too :)

Valsa George July 1, 2022 at 10:03 PM "soul, a wave, becomes the ocean, as love and light, God does instil,"..... What an ocean of meaning in this wave of thought ! Congratulations Seeker friend on your trophy win ! Unseeking Seeker July 1, 2022 at 11:08 PM Thank you, Valsa :)

Jenna Logan July 1, 2022 at 2:12 AM Congratulations on your win in Emile's contest with your thought provoking lines, Seeker. Unseeking Seeker July 1, 2022 at 11:07 PM Thank you, Jenna ~ seems it turned out well!

Robert James Liguori June 30, 2022 at 8:07 PM well done. I enjoyed your poem. Unseeking Seeker June 30, 2022 at 8:51 PM Thank you, Robert! :)

Sara Kendrick June 30, 2022 at 12:29 PM Congrats on this winner in Emile's contest. Way to go. Sara Unseeking Seeker June 30, 2022 at 6:45 PM Thank you, Sara! :)

Paula Goldsmith June 30, 2022 at 12:12 PM Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Today, be blessed with your win........... Unseeking Seeker June 30, 2022 at 6:45 PM Thank you dear Paula! :)

Terry Flood June 30, 2022 at 11:54 AM Congratulations on you top billing, Unseeking. I’m not a ‘Goddy’ person but it was a lovely write and ‘divine bliss potion’ did instil in me pleasant thoughts of a cool G&T. Terry Unseeking Seeker June 30, 2022 at 6:44 PM Thank you, Terry! Delighted you enjoyed

Regina Mcintosh June 30, 2022 at 10:37 AM Congrats friend. God bless you :) Love, Gina Unseeking Seeker June 30, 2022 at 6:43 PM Thank you, Gina! I was surprised too!

Emile Pinet June 30, 2022 at 9:39 AM Congratulations Unseeking! Your enlightening poem earned “First” place in my contest. This was a very challenging contest but your poem rose to the top of my list, well done my friend, Emile. Unseeking Seeker June 30, 2022 at 9:51 AM Thank you, Emile! This is indeed a pleasant surprise, since my poems are more about the message, with lesser emphasis on vocabulary or style. I’m honoured by the recognition :)