David Crandall Poet Alexandrine

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5/12/2024 for A - TYPES OF FORMS Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

Heart Inside a Heart

"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart) I am never without it..."  E.E. Cummings

My heart's ultrasound check - your heart, would find inside.
Eternal love for you - my ticker will abide.
Things one cannot resist - gravity, the moon's pull,
Alone, I say goodbye - my solo heart feels full.

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Constance La France May 30, 2024 at 7:20 AM David, congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative poem, Constance David Crandall May 30, 2024 at 9:50 AM Thanks so much Constance!

Sotto Poet May 12, 2024 at 5:47 PM David, your work is incredibly well-crafted on multiple levels. The vivid descriptions, outstanding poem, and fabulous entry into the contest are truly impressive. I wish you the best of luck in the contest! David Crandall May 12, 2024 at 5:53 PM Thanks Sotto, really appreciate your praise on this one!