'heart Ii Heart'

please thread quietly then you will hear the murmur or maybe feel it his heart talking to your heart an expectant pulsation
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September 3, 2013 at 7:56 AM
Beautiful and intimate. Cheers, Rach
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 2:59 PM
this is so nice, Wilma. I love when you do something like this, a tanka form!
Ellison Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 7:17 AM
Love your very passionate and descriptive words my dear Wilma! Warm hugs, Jack xoxox
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 2:37 AM
- Oh .... beautiful words, Wilma. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Gorelick Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 12:41 AM
Great work Wilma...I love this form...BG
Tacito Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 9:42 AM
Absolutely stunning lines, Wilma. Powerful last line...
Sivey Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 7:56 AM
This is such a beautiful and illustrious write my friend! You have written a tenderhearted poem here Wilma! I truly loved reading your dynamic piece this morning! What a positive poem, such a fantastically romantic verse, Great Work!!
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