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'heart Ii Heart'

please thread quietly then you will hear the murmur or maybe feel it his heart talking to your heart an expectant pulsation ©154728082013

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Rachel W

Date: 9/3/2013 7:56:00 AM

Beautiful and intimate. Cheers, Rach

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2013 2:59:00 PM

this is so nice, Wilma. I love when you do something like this, a tanka form!

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/29/2013 7:17:00 AM

Love your very passionate and descriptive words my dear Wilma! Warm hugs, Jack xoxox

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2013 2:37:00 AM

- Oh .... beautiful words, Wilma. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/29/2013 12:41:00 AM

Great work Wilma...I love this form...BG

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/28/2013 9:42:00 AM

Absolutely stunning lines, Wilma. Powerful last line...

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/28/2013 7:56:00 AM

This is such a beautiful and illustrious write my friend! You have written a tenderhearted poem here Wilma! I truly loved reading your dynamic piece this morning! What a positive poem, such a fantastically romantic verse, Great Work!!