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Heart Divided

HEART DIVIDED ` ` ` ` ` ` arms hanging on like twigs, as anger lives inside wired mind this virus from a soul growing restless for once, my heart's love flies divided until holy balm anoints, pouring grace with ease free verse copyright © for Brian Strand's VERSE.... max 5 Lines from nette onclaud

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/12/2011 7:36:00 AM

wow,,,very beautiful... from sinned to purified! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2011 7:55:00 PM

Congrats, Nette. I am seeing you here and there tonight with your cool poems as I catch up on winners' lists. I sure hope I am seeing most of my friends on the lists because I don't think I have much time to answer individual comments. How are you today, Nette? As you can see, I am doing better than yesterday! Luv, Andrea

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/8/2011 4:41:00 PM

Congrats on your HM, nette. Excellent piece. Nice going. Have a great weekend. luv Ralph

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/8/2011 7:35:00 AM

congrats on your win in the contest nette with this powerful piece

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/8/2011 7:20:00 AM

Just lovely is this inspired piece....says so much in few words! Congrats, dear Nette!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/8/2011 5:54:00 AM

Congrats Nette luv on your HM in Brian's contest with this lovely creative poetry.. so divinely written luv .. stunning imagery..enjoy honor and weekend too..sweetie..

Elaine George

Date: 7/8/2011 5:36:00 AM

Very deep verse, Nette. Many congrats on your HM. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2011 4:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Nette in Brian's contest. Love, Carol

Autumn Ehrhardt

Date: 7/7/2011 2:04:00 PM

Andrea recommended that I read your work. This piece is sublime. I would love if you could read a few of my pieces and give me some advice. Hope you place high in the contest.

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/7/2011 9:23:00 AM

True words and thank Jesus for His grace..Love this..Thanks for the kind words on Awaken 2 revised..Good luck in contest..Love to you.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/4/2011 11:40:00 AM

There you go again Nette, casting your spell with your wild pictures. :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/2/2011 9:46:00 AM

oh how interesting .. please tell me more about moon ceremony ..my Mom was a Moon child being a Cancer and always fascinated by the different shapes of the Moon.. sounds exciting and inviting Nette luv.. no puppy yet ..we are at the beach today.. seeing if one might be here for the "Sweetheart" so finicky..oh..

Kash Poet

Date: 7/2/2011 8:20:00 AM

Yes sometimes we are tied down by such ill viruses flowing through our veins....and we need wings of bird that time to make ourselves free.An insightful write Nette...best wishes.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/2/2011 6:33:00 AM

excellent and exquisite ..a masterpiece unfolds as u share your insightful self with us all Nette luv.. deeply penetrating lines linger in the mind of your crusade for life luv.. good luck in Randa's contest with this super stunning stirring write my friend..miss u much..u ok?

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 7/2/2011 4:16:00 AM

Hey there, Poet-Queen, you've gone and done it again. I'm left feeling like a ragdoll most times that I read your work... not much time to comment, today. I'm at in laws...girl's asleep, but will wake any second and I would love to reply to others here at PS and all their cheery comments...but had to say, especially loved ramblings double panting, panting (you should lick your thumb and stick it on your behind and say "sssss" for that one BRILLIANT) Gotta fly, take care Cyndi

Don Johnson

Date: 7/2/2011 4:15:00 AM

dragged hither n yonder, with new thoughts to ponder, a mind slightly dividing, ongoing, step round the cat, great verse here is unwinding :) xo, Don