Bl Devnath Poet Limerick

Heart Can'T Be Curbed

voice is not clear net is disturbed 
                                   one way line so boy is perturbed 
                                   it's raining storming with thunder 
                                sees another baby so does a blunder 
                               for few seconds heart can't be curbed

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2016 at 3:03 PM - Life is not easy ..... well written, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath March 24, 2016 at 3:06 PM Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

Karissa Kelley March 24, 2016 at 11:03 AM Nice limerick! I love the title and point of view. Xx Bl Devnath March 24, 2016 at 1:54 PM Thanks my lovely poetess friend for your visit and nice comment. Loved always, bl