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Heart Breaking Ice

lets break the ice melting sitting upon the knee standing tall love the tower of strength with unity of mind could hear a thousand voices singing this moment handing over a token undying love scarlet red holding in the hands a crimson delight from the deepest red dripping raw opening in the chest a treasure freshly bloomed mine heart within you a rose i give you my all

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Poet Tacito

Date: 9/9/2013 9:24:00 AM

Deep, honest, strong lines. There was much strength in your vulnerable stanzas. Very nicely done!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/9/2013 2:58:00 PM

THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/9/2013 7:09:00 AM

This rose smells beautifully Liam..

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/9/2013 2:57:00 PM

THANK YOU CHARMAINE IN PETAL SOFTNESS APPRECIATED HEARTFELT

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/9/2013 6:03:00 AM

What a way to break the ice , liam! I am impressed by this new poem of yours. Thanks for your kindness; your visit was greatly appreciated. Always, Laura

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/9/2013 6:25:00 AM

kindness is in the beautiful comment i received i thank you deeply greatly appreciated