Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Heart Breaking Ice

lets break the ice
melting sitting
upon the knee
standing tall
love the tower
of strength

with unity of mind
could hear 
a thousand voices
singing this moment
handing over
a token

undying love
scarlet red
holding in the hands
a crimson delight

from the deepest
red dripping raw
opening in the chest
a treasure 
freshly bloomed

mine heart
within you 
a rose
i give 
you my all

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Poet Tacito September 9, 2013 at 9:24 AM Deep, honest, strong lines. There was much strength in your vulnerable stanzas. Very nicely done! Liam Mcdaid September 9, 2013 at 2:58 PM THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Charmaine Chircop September 9, 2013 at 7:09 AM This rose smells beautifully Liam.. Liam Mcdaid September 9, 2013 at 2:57 PM THANK YOU CHARMAINE IN PETAL SOFTNESS APPRECIATED HEARTFELT

Laura Breidenthal September 9, 2013 at 6:03 AM What a way to break the ice , liam! I am impressed by this new poem of yours. Thanks for your kindness; your visit was greatly appreciated. Always, Laura Liam Mcdaid September 9, 2013 at 6:25 AM kindness is in the beautiful comment i received i thank you deeply greatly appreciated