This sonnet was inspired BY love. And some proof reading. I hope it is well received.
Elation steals the day smiling away Never have I felt so drawn, emotions Thundering, I wondered why and I sighed Wondering where she was, is she in pain? Maybe she's watching the rain with every Drop there is my beating heart, heart beat She, my only cause sure there must be laws Her beauty so clever purely GOD'S craft Times so right ignite the fuel we spark. A start A brand new forever Raindrops a pin drops silent is the night Listening for my heart beat a stellar song It is my beating heart which cries polite I hear her dainty feet, delicate noise Of mesmerizing music She steps on IN THE PATH OF PASSION'S floral essence The pulse of our passion is without end FAIREST MY BELOVE FROM THE HEARTS OF ANGELS
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