Adeleke Adeite Poet Sijo

Heart Apart

For love my haughty heart fell apart on a courteous cart;                                   
Love was once wicked, hurting my heart, I hated it as hell.
I’m sick, soaked in this sensual stream…I will surrender

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Daniel Cwiak June 9, 2010 at 9:15 AM Congrats on your win in the contest with this emotional Sijo! Dan C

Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2010 at 7:02 AM Congratulations Adeleke on your win in the "Sijo" contest by Rick Parise. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 8, 2010 at 7:48 PM Congrats A.A. on your HM in the Sijo contest with this wonderful write.. knew it when real previously..enjoy your special honor.. with luv from the "Swseetheart"

Joyce Johnson June 8, 2010 at 7:47 PM Congratulations Adeleke. Very nice. Love, Joyce

June 8, 2010 at 7:26 PM Good use of alliteration to carry your thoughts. Interesting perspective. Nice to see your name in the winners circle in Rick's contest. Congratulations! Hope things are well with you. Keep on writing. Karen

Skat A June 7, 2010 at 6:34 PM SURRENDER, STRONG WRITE