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Heart Apart

For love my haughty heart fell apart on a courteous cart; Love was once wicked, hurting my heart, I hated it as hell. I’m sick, soaked in this sensual stream…I will surrender

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/9/2010 9:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest with this emotional Sijo! Dan C
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Date: 6/9/2010 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations Adeleke on your win in the "Sijo" contest by Rick Parise. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:48:00 PM
Congrats A.A. on your HM in the Sijo contest with this wonderful write.. knew it when real previously..enjoy your special honor.. with luv from the "Swseetheart"
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations Adeleke. Very nice. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:26:00 PM
Good use of alliteration to carry your thoughts. Interesting perspective. Nice to see your name in the winners circle in Rick's contest. Congratulations! Hope things are well with you. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:20:00 PM
Congrats on your H.M. in my contest Adeleke~Enjoyed this piece very much~Rick
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:34:00 PM
SURRENDER, STRONG WRITE
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