Marilene Evans Poet Free verse

Hearing a Bell and My Heart

HEARING A BELL AND MY HEART

You
captured
my heart and you
captivated my mind,
yet you free my spirit, lift my
soul like hearing a bell ring when I think
of you, hearing my heart sing when
I see
you.


6/21/21     Ring My Bell Poetry
                 John Anderson

Used:        How Many Syllables

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Anne-Lise Andresen July 9, 2021 at 12:54 PM - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, Marilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Marilene Evans July 9, 2021 at 2:41 PM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise! Have a great day.

Joanna Daniel July 8, 2021 at 11:28 PM Lovely, congratulations, Marilene:) Marilene Evans July 8, 2021 at 11:37 PM Thank you so very much. Have a good night.

Eve Roper July 8, 2021 at 4:42 PM Beautiful verse, Marilene, congratulations on your first place win. Eve Marilene Evans July 8, 2021 at 5:05 PM Thank you. Thank you. Have a great evening.

Jan Allison July 8, 2021 at 12:21 PM you struck the right note with this gem. many congrats :-) hugs jan xx Marilene Evans July 8, 2021 at 12:31 PM I guess, my Music class helps! Thanks, Jan. Hugs to you.

Sam Kauffman July 8, 2021 at 8:50 AM Marilene, congratulations on your first place win! Lovely romantic write! Sounds like you had a great time on your trip south and wonderful birthday celebration for your "firecracker son!" So glad everything went well! Blessings my friend. Marilene Evans July 8, 2021 at 9:30 AM Thanks so much, Sam. I appreciate it. Yes, had fun with Missy and her kids and Jon and his girl friend Maria. Too bad... Missy went back to Hayward. Miss them already. She's the only one who does not live here in Southern Cal.l

Avery Won July 8, 2021 at 4:39 AM Beautiful, congrats on a top win! Marilene Evans July 8, 2021 at 7:28 AM Thank you, Avery! Have a nice day.

Beata Agustin July 8, 2021 at 1:37 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting. God bless you. Marilene Evans July 8, 2021 at 7:27 AM Thanks, Beata. Have a blessed day.

Suzette Richards July 7, 2021 at 11:29 PM A pure delight! Congratulations, Marilene. Marilene Evans July 8, 2021 at 7:25 AM Thank you Suzette. Have a great day.

Christuraj Alex July 7, 2021 at 8:58 PM Beautifully Written. Congratulations! Marilene Evans July 7, 2021 at 9:24 PM Thanks, Christiraj! Have a great evening.

Mystic Rose Rose June 21, 2021 at 4:50 PM I love the sweet chime of it all gl Marilene Evans June 21, 2021 at 5:47 PM Thanks do much. Have a great evening.

Alexis Y. June 21, 2021 at 4:36 PM WoW! Marilene, I liked your poem. You how I feel about love and romance. Is this a new form? You did well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Marilene Evans June 21, 2021 at 4:39 PM Supposed to look like a bell. Thanks, Alexis.... Have a great evening.