Heard! Heard! Heard!

The madness of the maiden is absolute,
She hears the voices no one else could know,
The ancient howling harbingers of who will stay and who will go—
The voices tell the maddened maiden so.

The virtue of the maiden, it is absolute-
She sleeps alone on cold, unloving sheets,
A man becomes her suitor—then in diffidence retreats,
And leaves her with her voices and defeats.

The sorrow of the maiden, it is absolute:
For still the voices ring within her ear;
She hears a whispered name of one who dies this very year—
The name—her own!—reiterates so clear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Curcio Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 10:14 AM
Oooh - that was an unexpected ending. The words ring as though declaimed. I like that. Congrats on your well thought out, well written poem being featured
Ehigiator Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 11:43 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week, much to think about here..God Bless*Tyesha
Jordan Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 4:19 AM
Steve very interesting take on things - Congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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February 10, 2009 at 2:07 PM
Congrats Steve on "Heard! Heard! Heard!" being featured. Vince
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February 9, 2009 at 12:31 AM
A narrative! Different perspective! Good write ~ Arany
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