Hear the Music

...SOUL TUNES...

Regret. It sounds like a drum roll...

Sweat prickling down my forehead,
Leaving the stage now a tempting idea,
There it is…Tuba? Sax? Trumpet!

Outshine? No, just survive is the new goal!

Twice it calls out. Run? Instead,
One arms sweeps, then the other, yeah!
The music sounds, and my body responds.

Don't think. Don't fret. Don't Agonize.

The guitar enters with growing tempo,
Tap. Tap. Kick. Sweep. Tap. Kick. Stomp.
A smile forms, back straightens, arms grow confident.

This is where I belong, that's what I realize.

The tapping increases, and the music begins to slow,
The skirt swirls around as I spin and the stage I tromp,
My feet and music fuse and I can’t help but feel self confident.

Halfway through? Oh my...already?

I am the music now. We are one. Not separate sounds anymore.
Swoosh goes the skirt. Taptaptap. Kick. Stomp. Taptaptap. Kick. Heel. 
The trumpets announce the end. Spin slowly.. Arms up. Hold.

My smile broadens. Careful. Keep steady. Steady.

Applause! Powerful, loud…The music I most adore!
It’s not the sounds…But what they make you feel.
Shhh. Just hear it. Let your ears be your eyes and behold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/19/2011 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Kristen Bruni's contest "Soul Tunes" Elsa. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2011 6:54:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Elsa. Many congrats on your Win. Lainie
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Date: 4/17/2011 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Elsa! Enjoy your win! Always, Annalise
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Date: 4/16/2011 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest, Elsa
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:55:00 PM
Congrats Elsa on your wonderful win in the Soul Tunes contest luv... enjoy your sweet success tonight...
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Date: 4/13/2011 10:13:00 AM
I am reading such diverse poems here today. Poets hearts are bleeding out poetry. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Elsa. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 9:09:00 AM
Lovely creative write Elsa..feeling themusic reading your lines so powerful.. good luck in the contest luv..
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