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~Hear The Call~ (Free Verse) Dreams of doom fills me quick, Overshadows my whole being And thoughts as dark come to be, With impending doom I can hardly see... I feel so tired, weary All of sudden feel heavier on my feet... Nothing to hold me, I can't take another step, His evil presence blinds my way... I'm falling into a darker endless hole, And a fear like none other raises over me, Where undead horrifying faces my heart grips... He overpowers me and his dark riders creeped on me... The precious he wants from me at all cost... And the ring bids me now ,strongly, to do his master's will! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2004 February.16.2015 Authors notes: (from Frodo's point of view at the Prancing Pony Inn. Frodo's about to slip into darkness...) -From my poetry collection and inspired by the LOTR trilogy and the Hobbit books and movies-)

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Bl Devnath

Date: 4/16/2015 9:29:00 AM

Smelling touch beautifully pictured. An excellent work indeed. You have occult of nice sensation with which you connected the inner with the outer happenings. 7 is sure. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/20/2015 5:08:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly,BL,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated my dear friend!You're always kind and sweet:) I wish you a very lovely week! In His light! God bless you!:) D

Anindita Bose

Date: 2/22/2015 1:22:00 AM

Hello Dorian, Great Work.. I loved it :) Best! Anindita

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 1:12:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Anindita, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely weekend! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/21/2015 4:22:00 AM

The dark side depicted so brilliantly that make it shine with its literal beauty, dear friend, Dorian! Superb and a seven!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/21/2015 6:45:00 AM

Thank you so kindly,Demetrios, for stopping by and commenting. Deeply appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D "

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/20/2015 11:14:00 PM

I love LOTR trilogy..Tolkien is my fav. You have painted darker side so well..unforgettable..a master writer at work love D. God bless.>>>rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/21/2015 6:45:00 AM

Thank you so kindly,Rajat, for stopping by and commenting. Deeply appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D "

David Meade

Date: 2/19/2015 6:04:00 PM

I love the LOTR -- your words are wonderful and delightful . . . as strong as the darkness is the light will win. Much love

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/19/2015 8:23:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Dave, for stopping by and commenting. Deeply appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D "

Ralph Sergi

Date: 2/19/2015 1:36:00 PM

Hi Dorian: Very ominous but an intense poem. My compliments

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/19/2015 1:43:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Ralph, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D "

Paul Callus

Date: 2/18/2015 3:44:00 PM

I see that you slipped into the realm of darkness here, Dorian! Much enjoyed! Take heed of Cherl's comments...she is a master creator of such writes! #7 hugs // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/19/2015 12:38:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Paul, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/17/2015 7:06:00 PM

Dear Dorian, Awesome my dearest young poet love your imagery on this work, you've given me many wonderful comments th at flatter me to the inner soul my dear so I written something special for you. It's in the out of the water contest, but I wrote it for you my dear, check my last poem posted and enjoy it with all my heart dear friend,cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/17/2015 11:58:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Cheri, for stopping by and commenting so nice on my poem. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Alesia Leach

Date: 2/17/2015 6:14:00 PM

Loved it! I remember the scene and the next when Arwen races across the meadows and through the forest with them on her heels. ;0)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/17/2015 6:52:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Alesia, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Karl Mcdonnell

Date: 2/17/2015 12:02:00 PM

Loved this one Dorian, makes me want to watch it again.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/17/2015 3:31:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Karl, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Vasudevan Desikachari

Date: 2/17/2015 10:40:00 AM

Great piece of poetry Dorian; the pathos that the last two lines carry drew tears from my eyes spontaneously.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/17/2015 3:30:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Vasudevan, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Julia Ward

Date: 2/17/2015 7:37:00 AM

Intriguing - loved it! Hugs, Alicia, xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/17/2015 3:30:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Alicia , for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Ken Carroll

Date: 2/16/2015 6:12:00 PM

Splendid mystical write Dorian..

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/17/2015 3:29:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Ken , for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/16/2015 4:58:00 PM

I absolutely love all of JJR Tolkien's work, so you have me hook line and sinker. You have painted a perfect picture of the dread Frodo felt, from as you said his perspective. Congratulations on a wonderful piece of poetry. Love Shane xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/17/2015 3:27:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Shane, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "