L Milton Hankins Poet Quatrain

Health Crisis

The doctors say I am a total wreck
They will evaluate the rest they find
Bottom of my feet to top of my neck
It appears I have misplaced my mind.


written July 21, 2021
for "Flair and Fun Quatrain Poetry" poetry contest
sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

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Sotto Poet July 21, 2021 at 3:55 PM I enjoyed reading this quatrain since, at our age, going to the doctor is always a challenge, worrying what the next discovery will be, but you made it so humorous and delightful. Excellent work, best wishes with the contest L Milton Hankins July 21, 2021 at 4:06 PM Thanks so much, Lasaad. Yes, I have my share of doctor visits! LOL

Rico Leffanta July 21, 2021 at 11:36 AM No worries! It will turn up where you least expect it! L Milton Hankins July 21, 2021 at 11:52 AM Likely, Rico. I've been scratching my head, hoping to stimulate something and when it is stirring about, I will catch it.

Nancy Kaufman July 21, 2021 at 10:43 AM aw oh, must be catching?? L Milton Hankins July 21, 2021 at 11:29 AM Oh my, I hope not. I've been trying desperately to locate my mind.

Tom Cunningham July 21, 2021 at 10:21 AM Lol, good one Milton, I dread going to the docs wondering what else he'll find. Hope you soon find it. Tom L Milton Hankins July 21, 2021 at 10:29 AM Me, too. Tom, it's really frustrating to lose your mind. Trust me on this! Thanks for the read, friend.