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Health Crisis

The doctors say I am a total wreck They will evaluate the rest they find Bottom of my feet to top of my neck It appears I have misplaced my mind. written July 21, 2021 for "Flair and Fun Quatrain Poetry" poetry contest sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/21/2021 3:55:00 PM
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I enjoyed reading this quatrain since, at our age, going to the doctor is always a challenge, worrying what the next discovery will be, but you made it so humorous and delightful. Excellent work, best wishes with the contest
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/21/2021 4:06:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Lasaad. Yes, I have my share of doctor visits! LOL
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/21/2021 11:36:00 AM
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No worries! It will turn up where you least expect it!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/21/2021 11:52:00 AM
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Likely, Rico. I've been scratching my head, hoping to stimulate something and when it is stirring about, I will catch it.
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 7/21/2021 10:43:00 AM
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aw oh, must be catching??
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/21/2021 11:29:00 AM
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Oh my, I hope not. I've been trying desperately to locate my mind.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/21/2021 10:21:00 AM
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Lol, good one Milton, I dread going to the docs wondering what else he'll find. Hope you soon find it. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/21/2021 10:29:00 AM
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Me, too. Tom, it's really frustrating to lose your mind. Trust me on this! Thanks for the read, friend.

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