Healing Garden

You left the garden in a mess.
Strange thing for a gardener.
But they say those with trades 
leave their own home last on the list.

I remember rolling up my sleeves.
On my knees rolling like a carpet
the grass covered paths.
Between six raised beds.

And the shed full of discarded things.
Paint boxes, boat engines, 
strimmer cord, trailing ivy
and electrical items that
no longer carried a spark.

In the dark of my broken dreams
it seems the garden wanted to heal.
I toiled and sweated in a blissful state.
Pulling weeds as if in prayer.
Uncovering tree roots along giant rocks.

The resulting bounty now
reflect those tears I shed.
In their center they carry
the memory of my hurt.
Their beauty bringing a smile.


06/05/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/13/2019 6:56:00 AM
A lovely dedication! Silent One and Jan Alison are the best as are so many others! Such a bouquet of unseen smiles! Blessings, sweet lady!
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/13/2019 6:58:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 5/7/2019 5:23:00 AM
A lovely write...you're alive in ink...the dedication palpitates...
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/7/2019 5:44:00 AM
Alive in ink....what a lovely compliment. I know what you mean because my poems come mostly from life experience. I had told Silent I would not waste any more pen or paper on my husband. My muse had other ideas.
Date: 5/7/2019 3:35:00 AM
A lovely dedication to a wonderful poet who sets a high standard on soup. Well written Jean. Tom.
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/7/2019 4:51:00 AM
Thank you Tom. He is amazing yet always so modest.
Date: 5/7/2019 3:32:00 AM
- A garden full of memories ... some have left their mark - A beautiful poem, Jean - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/7/2019 4:50:00 AM
Thank you Anna-Lise. Each day now after work I take a cup of tea to my garden seat and let the stress of the day's work fall away.
Date: 5/6/2019 2:31:00 PM
Thank you for the beautiful dedication Jean... you have always been so lovely and sweet. Your poetry had developed really well... this is brilliant poem and I like the metaphor... I think youve done a lot better in your garden than that so called gardner... our tears are always wasted on those that do not deserve it...
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Date: 5/6/2019 2:34:00 PM
Silent...you know me so well, as if from birth. I have opened my heart and soul here only, knowing I am supported in a comforting cocoon. Words cannot expressed the healing I have found through this medium.
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