Head(S) Or Tail(S)

summers’ last prayer

you’re about to lose your head…

while getting some tail


*For the Praying Mantis Haiku Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Praying Mantis Haiku's". Love, Carol
Conway Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 9:17 AM
This is still the most funny one I've read-Congrat's on your win John!~Tirzah~
Arteaga Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 9:18 PM
hehehe i loving all these congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 1:00 PM
hahahaha. OH my goodness. This one is AWESOME. Congratulations on the cleverest one I saw. Luv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 11:53 AM
Congratulations John on your worthy win in Carolyn's contest. Agape,Moses
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July 8, 2010 at 9:02 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Keep on writing. Karen
Richards Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 8:47 PM
So funny......this was a hoot!! :) Congratulations on your win! ~
Sweetheart Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 8:24 PM
Congrats John on your winning poem in the Mantis contest.. way to go.. enjoy ..with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 8:21 PM
You're a hoot, John, and you placed second in the contest. Congratulations on this witty write! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 4:25 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today John. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol
Ryerson Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 9:14 PM
Mercy me, John!... This is a good one for sure!... Don't lose your head! - Tim
Conway Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 8:31 PM
That's hillarious! And yet so sickeningly true!~Tirzah~
Mitchell Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Lol! Very good! Love it!! Good luck in the contest :)
Flach Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 3:57 PM
John, no problem at all. I guess weird minds think alike. I like the way you put it. In a way, I guess we all loose our heads while getting some tail.
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