Heading Into Mothers Day Weekend

Dark hour of morning green and jealous sun. Flag’s red, white, and blue leans over the porch. Oak branches, bored, and skeleton but wood. The leaves too still, no breath of life, no sigh. M a h o g a n y - s a t u r a t e d f l o w e r s in frame with inky stems, ebonic blend. The missing link between Winter and Spring does spread its wings, still life below the clouds. Oh! I hear it! Oh! I knew it! The rain o b s i d i a n does wake - the s h a t t e r i n g, a m e l a n c h o l y roar, a s i l e n t pour. There is hope fulness, hope lessness in it. A tediousness-grace, beside next day. A full out vortex burst of rosy cheeks, this day tempers. The birds concur with me. 5/12/2023
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Date: 5/14/2023 10:53:00 AM
Such awesome imagery. Love the way you changed how we see words like hopelessness.
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Date: 5/14/2023 2:14:00 AM
Like this poem. Soon it will be mother's day. We both have lost our dear ones.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2023 5:38:00 AM
Yes…hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/13/2023 11:17:00 PM
Incredible, well articulated! You have well painted the imagery through your words Kim! <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2023 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, BJ
Date: 5/13/2023 8:40:00 PM
I love the stanza about the rain, and everything. // Imparts a whole new freshness and a zing! HMD, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2023 5:37:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 5/13/2023 4:30:00 PM
Your rich tapestry deserves an accolade, love it, :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2023 6:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rose! xx
Date: 5/13/2023 4:11:00 AM
A beauty and a fave. I love this. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2023 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Gina! <3
Date: 5/12/2023 5:35:00 PM
Excellently unique and innovative poetry, Kim. Amazing mental picture-making. A real fave!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2023 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, my very kind friend!
Date: 5/12/2023 11:23:00 AM
Very original and creative poem, Kim. Wonderful imagery. Indeed, a FAVE!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2023 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay! I so appreciate you, my friend!
Date: 5/12/2023 11:18:00 AM
The exquisite colors and luscious contrasts of textures, sights and sounds, along with delightful personification, create the setting for a wonderful Mother's Day indeed. This is a fave. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2023 1:02:00 PM
I am so happy you stopped in to read this one, Evelyn! Thank you so much! xxoo
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