Liam Fraser Poet Rhyme

Head Down, Chin Up

As a human I've found life can be hard
Feeling low, we let down our Guard
Negative thoughts keep us weighed down
Our faces show off merely a frown

Lately though, a changed feel to the Gut
Having kept my head down but always chin up
As a human I've found life can be hard, Yes that's true
But It's a whole lot better now with a Positive attitude

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Casarah Nance April 23, 2014 at 8:15 PM Hey Liam, I love that name Liam btw, Keep that positive attitude, there are too many people already that look down, look up and see the world man, its awesome, keep sharing with us, write on!

James Fraser April 23, 2014 at 5:52 PM Although ones head can be down, a positive chin up approach is what it takes people to desire to reach the next level. Only one person can do this......chowa!

Judy Konos April 23, 2014 at 5:34 PM Very good...thanks