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One of my favorite poets here is Craig Cornish. He made me fall in love with the sonnet. :) He coached me in getting the meter right. It has become my favorite form to write in. This is a poem Craig wrote for me. I'm so honored! :) Menina que Passa for Eileen She saunters along the boardwalk more confident than in her youth, when young men would swoon and older men were wishing to be young again. She meanders next to the surf laughing at the sea's efforts to catch her toes in a rush of briny bubbles tickling the grains of sand hurry away. She strolls and as the sea eddies and pools in her footsteps like the memories that wash her mind tosses her hair face to the sun and embraces the day She wanders near the smooth stones polished by the relentless tides like days and years they come and are gone come and are gone but with each a blessing she ambles among those blessings with a flair and an aire she has that "Something" that "Je ne se qua" and she is beautiful Craig Cornish To me, a gift of words is one of the most treasured gifts I could ever receive. Thanks, Craig, for making me feel beautiful today. :) Hugs

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Date: 7/10/2015 12:58:00 PM
Wow. Such a lovely write for you. I love the scene along the boardwalk...captures one's imagination. hugs!
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Date: 7/7/2015 1:23:00 PM
I forgot to say welcome to having a Lifetime membership Eileen!
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Date: 7/7/2015 1:12:00 PM
To be honored with a poem is a great gift indeed, and this one is a real beauty and a wonderful gift to a deserving soul Eileen.
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Date: 7/7/2015 5:11:00 AM
Wow from one great poet to another, a gift you are surely worthy of.
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:09:00 PM
What a magnificent poem Craig wrote for you, Eileen! Your influence and inspiring, romantic words have captured the hearts and imaginations of fellow friends on this site! Amazing :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:07:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Laura. You are kind. I know why! :) Heaven's light rests on you. I'm glad that I have this poem to treasure. I often feel old and frumpy. I'm not taking too well to seeing 50 coming up. Two years away now. This poem makes me feel....beautiful. Hugs to you.
Date: 7/6/2015 9:19:00 AM
Craig rocked this one and I too am an admirer of his chosen subject!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:09:00 PM
Are you now? Well, that's good to know, Richard. Thanks for the post. Yes, I do think Craig wrote this with style. His work is awesome. Hugs
Date: 7/6/2015 3:19:00 AM
Awwwwww how beautiful! This is wonderful!!! Poets like Craig are so special. Always, Laura
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:12:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. There are many poets here who are fabulous. Craig knows his stuff. I appreciate the visit.
Date: 7/5/2015 11:32:00 PM
Every line is beautiful on its own but together, a poetic masterpiece! Craig is one of my favorite poets on Soup, as are you, Eileen. Keeping this one in my faves...hugs, Rhonda
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:12:00 PM
:) Thank you for letting me know, Rhonda. I'm touched. You are a sweetie pie through and through and your poetry is beautiful. HUGSSSS
Date: 7/5/2015 11:30:00 PM
wow, this is AMAZING. Gosh how do YOU rate, lady?? Craig really outdid himself with this poem!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:13:00 PM
Yes, he did! :) I'm beaming. He really is a fantastic write. I rate it the highest it can go. Thanks for the visit, dear.
Date: 7/5/2015 6:09:00 PM
Wonderful work with great thought given to the subject mater as it is rapidly unfolded for the readers delight. Nice flow of words and a pleasant sounding poem with all the right stuff to evoke familiar memories that are easy to relate to. The words say a lot and convey strong emotions without a lot of window dressing. Emile.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:17:00 PM
What a fantastic review this is, dear Emile. I'm glad you found this piece to be delightful. I do love that word. This poem made me feel light and carefree....a lovely feeling. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 7/5/2015 4:03:00 PM
Craig is one of my favourite poets too and awhile ago I was in tears cuz I thought He was going to leave.If he didnt stay I woudnt be reading such a masterpiece, such a beautiful and elegant poem for a most beautiful lady on this soup,inside and out Eileen.You deserve it.Words can be a great gift especially when they are coming from those who are so close to heart. A fav.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2015 4:05:00 PM
Yes, I read the blog about his leaving. I had no emotional energy to make a difference as I had recently gone through some trauma here. I'm glad he is staying now. Yes, this is a lovely write and I will cherish it always. Thanks for your kind words, Charmaine...you are a charm!!! :) Hugs
Date: 7/5/2015 3:46:00 PM
- You are always beautiful, dear Eileen - A good friend who is thinking of you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2015 3:57:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. It is a dear present, indeed. Hugs

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