Richard Lamoureux Poet I do not know?

He Was

He was a big man
a gigantic tall man
a large imposing brute of a man
a do whatever he wants to do man

He was a
I can do anything man 
a you better get out of my way man
a stand up walk shake the ground man
a ready for battle boisterous  man
a several severed heads on sticks man

Then one day he faced
a somewhat small man 
a not very tall man
a gentle weak looking shepherd man

But this was a special man
an I’m with God I can do anything man
Still Goliath was a mocking man
laughing at the small stone twirling boy man
Unimpressed with that steady on shaking ground man
That not backing down weakling loinclothed man

One big one small
oddly paired historic men
Destined born to come together men
Who changed the course of history men
Story recounted retold from back then
Scribed by Scholars with paper and pen
Rock against sword one bigger by ten
David stood with God his nation to defend
on simple armor he didn’t depend
With odds against him one hundred times ten
In the end it was Goliath that would never stand again!

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Eileen Manassian March 27, 2020 at 4:44 PM It was lovely to read this one again, dear. Full of spiritual nourishment. You might want to give my poem another read. I've posted an audio file to it....a file of my reading of the poem. Richard Lamoureux March 27, 2020 at 4:47 PM On my way.

Michelo Mweetwa October 19, 2019 at 9:39 AM Another demonstration of your versatility. Great poem! Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2019 at 10:54 AM Thanks Michelo. Cool name, tell me about it.

Jeff Connelly September 3, 2019 at 6:01 AM Nice repetitious words man. I cool way of retelling the tale; for in the end Goliath was the never to get up again kind of a man lol. Richard, I did watch a theological archeologist point out that because of Goliath's unnaturally large size for those times indicated that he had some sort of brain to body ratio problem, and so had a soft point if hit would kill him. Also, that where David came from folks still use slings and are damn good shots. Jeff Connelly September 3, 2019 at 9:43 AM I agree. All that weight and the fate of all put upon a boy's shoulders took miraculous courage. Richard Lamoureux September 3, 2019 at 7:43 AM Thanks Jeff, I appreciate you exploring my poetry. ;0). Sometimes people wish to take away from the miraculous. For me the miracle was the courage David had in facing Goliath.

Duke Beaufort November 3, 2018 at 10:53 AM Hopefully, having god on our side means that we are empathetic, fair, honorable, and with some self-control. If this is what it means, then I am all for it!! You retell the story very effectively. It could also be a metaphor for how superior technology allows one to win in the end. Swords have more than two edges. Richard Lamoureux September 3, 2019 at 7:43 AM Thanks Duke, interesting thoughts.

CayCay Godwin October 12, 2018 at 11:35 PM You COULD sell this, I think, marketed to Church teen-aimed Sunday School Classes. It captivates from the get go and catching teenage attention is a sought accomplishment. I think. Loved it, may I buy it? Seriously, after it captivated me it held me, and already know the story (smiling). Poetry hugs ... CayCay Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2018 at 9:28 AM You are sweet Cay Cay. Thanks!

Becca Teagan October 12, 2018 at 2:12 PM When God is on our side, we can accomplish the seemingly impossible. Hope you're doing ok, Rick. Hope you pick your pen back up. Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2018 at 9:34 AM So true but not experienced on a regular enough basis. Perhaps a lack of faith or desire by us. Thanks for asking, I am doing well. Lots going on at the moment.

Eileen Manassian October 12, 2018 at 12:22 PM OH! Have you not posted since? Why? You have been to so many interesting places. I'm sure that you have lots to write about. Come on now...I'm waiting for a new one. You told me to let you know when I have a new blog up...well, go and check it out. Hugs Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2018 at 9:34 AM On my way. Also I have posted a new one.

John Hamilton October 11, 2018 at 2:04 PM Great title Rick drew me in, so well said, so big and strong and yet no challenge for the God fearing shepherd boy. Lots of modern day applications can be made. Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2018 at 9:51 AM Thanks John.

Vegter Papyrus October 10, 2018 at 10:59 AM I love the parable. No matter how big problems seem, they are solvable with a working and fighting faith. Fear is debilitating. God's work being glorified...salute! Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2018 at 9:51 AM Thanks Keith.

Alexis Y. October 6, 2018 at 6:34 PM WoW! Richard, I've never read the story of David and Goliath quite like this before. I really enjoyed the read. I missed reading your remarkable pen:-) Alexis

Vladislav Raven October 6, 2018 at 2:07 PM Hi Richard, you have written this biblical tale in such a wonderful fashion, one can say, in a Richard fashion. Your work is always so interesting. I love the modern content. You bring an ancient story into the modern age in an excellent way. Your creativity shines my friend. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon October 5, 2018 at 5:58 PM Lovely! A skillfully recounted biblical reality. Love always, dear friend. Adeniji

Muhammad Imtiaz October 5, 2018 at 8:48 AM Nice rephrasing the historic event in beautiful way. this is also in Quran. thanks for sharing Hope you are good and doing well

Harry Horsman October 1, 2018 at 10:51 AM I once met a person in Australia, from Ethiopia, a christian who actually knew, someone who could trace their ancestry right back to David the one whom you write of in this splendid poem. as for form, why not 'Mono rhyme' there are many versions of such..and yes i like this a lot..

M. L. Kiser September 27, 2018 at 4:11 PM I like this one; you've penned an old story in a modern-day way that just fits the reader's needs. Well done.

Freddie Robinson Jr. September 26, 2018 at 10:39 AM Real cool and inspirational timeless poem, Mr. Lamoure. Beautiful story retold w/poetic passion. Aurora bright poetry, my dear friend. Love and joy always.

Ralph Sergi September 24, 2018 at 9:38 AM A message from God to David that has resounded for all the ages that people would be bullied for their beliefs. A good read, Rick! Richard Lamoureux September 25, 2018 at 11:55 PM Thanks Ralph.

Susan Ashley September 23, 2018 at 8:12 PM Richard, such an awesome, compelling and poetic re-telling of the courage displayed by David against Goliath and paganism. Superb! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Richard Lamoureux September 23, 2018 at 11:55 PM Thanks Susan.

Eileen Manassian September 23, 2018 at 9:48 AM Amen, dear....well written. There comes a crazy kind of courage that only God can provide. Enjoyed this. Richard Lamoureux September 23, 2018 at 11:51 PM That is true. ;0)

Vijay Pandit September 23, 2018 at 7:16 AM Such deep message in your poem, Richard..you delivered it effectively. Richard Lamoureux September 23, 2018 at 9:26 AM Thanks Vijay.:0)

Arthur Vaso September 23, 2018 at 2:40 AM A Goliath of a poem! :) Richard Lamoureux September 23, 2018 at 9:26 AM I was thinking it was more of a David of a poem!

Lawrence Sharp September 23, 2018 at 1:09 AM Excellent penmanship, Richard, great write. Richard Lamoureux September 23, 2018 at 9:31 AM Thanks Lawrence.