He Used To Call Me Hood

In my head is a little green monster who wants to put me down.
He has a pointed purple tail, and he wears an angry frown.
He says such mean things to me, he used to keep me mad and sad.
Now when he starts up, I barely hear him, and this is rather rad.

He used to call me loser, tell me I was not so good.
He used to put down my choices, and called me mean words like “a hood”.
He used to tell me I would always come in last in every kind of race.
I heard him in my cocoa, my math class, and every other place.

He was an uninvited monster, and he ruled me long and hard.
He was aggressive, and mean, made my life feel like a chard.
I stopped listening to him, when I became a baby child’s mother.
I knew I had to throw him out, so I did, in which way and another.

He kept creeping back into my mind, whispering stupid, mean stuff.
I had to get vicious with him; I threw him out, and frankly, I was tough.
Finally, I told him he could stay, but only if he was willing to change.
Now he is my advocate, and my friend, for we are both deranged.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Deranged or not, any monster in my cocoa had better skedaddle and fast. Really though, cute as a bug in a rug.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:28 AM
Thank you. I truly loved it when the last word came out like "ta-dah!"
Mcferran Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Ooooh, I didn't see that last line coming! ;D LOVE IT!!!! (Another FAV...)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:28 AM
When Trixie threw out "deranged!" I laughed and snorted and stuff.
Wolf Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 9:16 AM
You 'tossed off' that last line so nonchalanty---but it's such a ZINGER, Caren! Kudos. ~ gw
Krutsinger Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 10:50 AM
I am the expert at zingers, truly.
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