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He Turned Fifty Shades of Green On St Patrick's Day

Mick and Paddy got steaming drunk
And off to the toilet they slunk
Poor Paddy was sick
So was his friend Mick
‘Bejeezus’ the bathroom it stunk!

Not for contest - Happy St Patrick's Day folks

03~17~17

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Eve Roper March 27, 2017 at 9:46 AM Hahaha :-) fabulous ~* Jan Allison March 27, 2017 at 9:55 AM Cheers Eve lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray March 19, 2017 at 5:43 PM "Not for contest" That's a shame. You must have a better one up your sleeve Jan. Jan Allison March 20, 2017 at 1:12 PM I posted another one for the contest I'm not sure which one is the best one I just adore writing the limerick form:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2017 at 4:07 PM the title is quite clever too. SEVEN Jan Allison March 20, 2017 at 1:11 PM Thanks Andrea:-) I do love to pull people in with a clever title I think it is as important as the actual poem itself:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2017 at 4:07 PM hahaha. FANTASTIC Jan Allison March 20, 2017 at 1:11 PM :-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance March 18, 2017 at 5:22 AM Haha... cheers. Jan Allison March 18, 2017 at 7:17 AM Cheers Cas:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin March 18, 2017 at 3:08 AM And you do these sober - it's amazing! Another LOL. Miss Limerick, you keep them slick! Hugs ... CayCay Jan Allison March 18, 2017 at 7:17 AM ha ha ha CayCay I DREAD to think of what I would write if I did have a drink and then wrote - would be more poop poop poems than ever then lol:-) hugs jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 17, 2017 at 8:41 PM LOL...I can't help myself. I have to read all of your recent limericks tonight. I've been missing out! Jan Allison March 18, 2017 at 7:13 AM I do enjoy the limerick form and I LOVE the fact that people seem to enjoy the humour and come to visit my fun poems:-) Thanks for your continued support Rhonda:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. March 17, 2017 at 7:50 PM Lol! Jan , this isfunny or should I say smelly poem. Happy St. Patrick's Day To You Too:-) Alexis Jan Allison March 17, 2017 at 7:53 PM Thanks Alexis - makes me so glad i rarely drink alcohol and when I do it is just one glass:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop March 17, 2017 at 5:01 PM Hahaha..lol..You made my night :) Jan Allison March 17, 2017 at 5:03 PM Glad I made you smile Charma:-) Huby always goes to meet friends at the pub on a Friday - as it's St Patrick's day I am sure he will have a tale or two to tell when he gets back in lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith March 17, 2017 at 4:52 PM corned beef & cabbage and a pint or two... St Paddy's Day it's what we Irish do...boil up some taters...save some for later...the pub's spinnin and I cant find the loo Jan Allison March 17, 2017 at 4:55 PM ha ha ha you should post that Tim:-) hugs Jan xx