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He Turned Fifty Shades of Green On St Patrick's Day

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Mick and Paddy got steaming drunk And off to the toilet they slunk Poor Paddy was sick So was his friend Mick ‘Bejeezus’ the bathroom it stunk! Not for contest - Happy St Patrick's Day folks 03~17~17

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/27/2017 9:46:00 AM

Hahaha :-) fabulous ~*

Jan Allison
Date: 3/27/2017 9:55:00 AM

Cheers Eve lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 3/19/2017 5:43:00 PM

"Not for contest" That's a shame. You must have a better one up your sleeve Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/20/2017 1:12:00 PM

I posted another one for the contest I'm not sure which one is the best one I just adore writing the limerick form:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2017 4:07:00 PM

hahaha. FANTASTIC

Jan Allison
Date: 3/20/2017 1:11:00 PM

:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2017 4:07:00 PM

the title is quite clever too. SEVEN

Jan Allison
Date: 3/20/2017 1:11:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) I do love to pull people in with a clever title I think it is as important as the actual poem itself:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/18/2017 5:22:00 AM

Haha... cheers.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/18/2017 7:17:00 AM

Cheers Cas:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/18/2017 3:08:00 AM

And you do these sober - it's amazing! Another LOL. Miss Limerick, you keep them slick! Hugs ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 3/18/2017 7:17:00 AM

ha ha ha CayCay I DREAD to think of what I would write if I did have a drink and then wrote - would be more poop poop poems than ever then lol:-) hugs jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/17/2017 8:41:00 PM

LOL...I can't help myself. I have to read all of your recent limericks tonight. I've been missing out!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/18/2017 7:13:00 AM

I do enjoy the limerick form and I LOVE the fact that people seem to enjoy the humour and come to visit my fun poems:-) Thanks for your continued support Rhonda:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/17/2017 7:50:00 PM

Lol! Jan , this isfunny or should I say smelly poem. Happy St. Patrick's Day To You Too:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2017 7:53:00 PM

Thanks Alexis - makes me so glad i rarely drink alcohol and when I do it is just one glass:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/17/2017 5:01:00 PM

Hahaha..lol..You made my night :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2017 5:03:00 PM

Glad I made you smile Charma:-) Huby always goes to meet friends at the pub on a Friday - as it's St Patrick's day I am sure he will have a tale or two to tell when he gets back in lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/17/2017 4:52:00 PM

corned beef & cabbage and a pint or two... St Paddy's Day it's what we Irish do...boil up some taters...save some for later...the pub's spinnin and I cant find the loo

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2017 4:55:00 PM

ha ha ha you should post that Tim:-) hugs Jan xx