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He Took My Hand

When he took my hand this drab world changed summer grasses became a carpet of green where we lay hour after hour lost in each other My eyes saw color in everything and my heart filled with raw emotion His touch rivaled the warmth of the sun causing buds to blossom on our trees my lips open to his my heart open to love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/13/2017 7:31:00 AM
Powerful!
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Date: 7/23/2017 6:15:00 AM
A new love opens our eyes to many things. I'm happy for anyone who finds love, rt.
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Date: 7/22/2017 12:27:00 PM
such a romantic pen filled with raw emotion - I love it :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2017 12:12:00 PM
Falling in love awesomeness you have captured here so well :)
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Date: 7/22/2017 11:22:00 AM
Sounds very nice :)
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