He Told Her He Was Leaving

He could still see that old flame burning in her eyes
But the flame was not for him, that was no surprise
He recalled those nights when she had muffled her cries
And he had learned too late an old love never dies

Then the deceit began with a long string of lies
And he pondered options that ended in goodbyes
But weakly decided he'd have a few more tries
Before the stress of silence cut him down to size

He told her he was leaving, not the whens or whys
It didn't matter if it was or wasn't wise
She said I still love you see how my teardrop dries
He laughed and said he'd stay until that old pig flies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Martin Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Congratulations Larry - nicely penned! :-)
Smith Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 11:24 AM
The boy had a way with words, congratulations Larry...
Bradfield Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 12:14 PM
Thanks, Charlie!
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 7:56 PM
This is a well told story of deception in your poem. I enjoyed this. Congrats on the win.
Bradfield Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 8:29 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Always nice to hear from you...Larry
Hamilton Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 11:09 AM
Very nice Larry congrats on a fine placement!
Bradfield Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 8:30 PM
Thank you, John!!
Breidenthal Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 11:44 PM
:) I read it two times and this is a remarkable verse. Keep writing and posting. ;) I am going to read another from you today. -JWE
Bradfield Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 2:07 PM
You are most kind and I thank you for your comment!!..Larry
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