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He says She says

He says it was all her She says it was all him He took away her gentle pur She made his flame grow dim He still thinks of her She still thinks of him Her hesitant indecisiveness left doubt leaving him unsure His unspoken words left her hanging on a limb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/10/2018 4:11:00 PM
Great little poem about the ineffectiveness of telepathy in modern day relationships. Well done, Melissa.
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Melissa Tracy
Date: 3/11/2018 6:34:00 AM
Thank you, Line :)
Date: 3/10/2018 8:50:00 AM
The making up is always good afterwards.
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Melissa Tracy
Date: 3/11/2018 6:33:00 AM
When compromise can be met it can be a beautiful thing