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He Says Goodbye

He now says goodbye to his trusted friends So much missed now, as their time ends Their road together had its ups and downs A visual spectrum, from dapper to clowns Though he fought to keep them from going astray A stubborn few had to go there own way He tried to stall their leaving, to no avail With those left remaining their pallor a tale A natural departure, not diabolical He misses each one, every fallen follicle!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/11/2017 9:50:00 AM
Lol, this is so funny and clever Pat!~Che :)
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/11/2017 5:14:00 PM
Thanks Cheryl. The dearly departed and sorely missed...80)
Date: 10/10/2017 6:09:00 PM
ha ha ha I love the surprise ending you really gave it a twist at the end Pat:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2017 5:13:00 PM
I guess as a departure it is what it is. Might as well write a poem about it!!....x.....x.....80).....

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