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He Renovates

He constantly refurbishes, revamps and remodels his home. I asked him: why? He said: 'I don’t have enough time, I tire easily, I do what I can'. When he is not working on household projects, he sits in the dark, heavy curtains drawn.

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Date: 1/18/2025 10:05:00 AM
Your poem seems rather sad and lonely, but I can understand. I don't know if that was the intention of your poem but either way, I like it even if I got the meaning wrong.
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Selena Jackson
Date: 1/20/2025 3:09:00 PM
You are very much welcome Eric; I am glad I got it right I didn't want to offend. Have a good day. Selena
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Eric Ashford
Date: 1/18/2025 12:09:00 PM
Thank you, Selena, yes, it's about a guy who has lost his way. Cheers. E

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