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He of the Jaundiced Eye

The jaundiced eye is yellow - but not the yellow of sunny cheerfulness or optimism Rather – the yellow of an alcoholic’s eyes when after years of feeding his destructive habit, he is stricken ill and is dying. Like the bad drunk who blames others for his miserable condition, he of the jaundiced eye finds his own hideousness staring back at him in the eyes of those in whom his own misdeeds he sees and then judges as worthless. By viewing things through yellow eyes, he is– in fact – yellow. The yellow of cowardiceness and the yellow of jealousy and anger reside in the whites of his eyes. He is sick, and his sickness seeps through his soul, infecting his thoughts and actions, which in turn infects those around him. His negativity and bias may hurt others, but in the end, he has mainly hurt only himself. Unless he makes a mighty change, he will disintegrate ultimately into the horrible dark void of his own mortality. June 29, 2021 for Unseeking Seeker's the 'Jaundiced Eye' Poetry Contest July 12 for 'A Brian Strand July 13' Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/4/2021 12:22:00 PM
He was drunk; drunk bad his mind poisoned & Countenance sad, so sad' he needs a mountain Of change, that's why he keeps on begging But even though he gets the change It can't transform him he can't see the possibility' s For a mountain of sin before him Disintegration of senses is a daily curse A dark void beckons a looming course, Then a bell wakes him suddenley! it's uncle Ern Get up he says, it's your turn on the ice cream Van, he realises just how deep that poem took him In' I liked it'
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Date: 7/2/2021 11:08:00 AM
Powerful Andrea. It's always easier to blame someone, something or fate for our current situations. Well written words and images. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/1/2021 11:53:00 PM
He is sick, and his sickness seeps through his soul, infecting his thoughts and actions, Beautifully written.
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Date: 7/1/2021 10:36:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for participating in the contest with these lucid thoughts. Congrats on your win! Do have a look at the next contest ‘Tat Tvam Asi’
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Date: 7/1/2021 6:35:00 AM
Good one Andrea. I know such people who hold some high posts and live their lives hated by everyone!! All the best in the contest!
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Date: 6/29/2021 2:22:00 PM
It's always sad to meet someone like this, or someone who had to live in that person's shadow of misery. I like how you used the different expressions of the color yellow to compare and contrast this person's traits. Well done.
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Date: 6/29/2021 10:33:00 AM
Such people do exist Ria....who see negativity in everything they see and they keep hurting others... Nice take in the contest... Best wishes... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 6/29/2021 9:01:00 AM
painful, but real situation about some lives - feel sad! Excellent images to describe the emotional void. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 6/29/2021 8:30:00 AM
Such a pitiful situation when a person reaches this stage of dying. Your poem is so precise and rich with imagery, Andrea.
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Date: 6/29/2021 8:19:00 AM
It takes all sorts but there's a lot of bad people in our societies. Tom
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Date: 6/29/2021 7:22:00 AM
Wow! Startling write -- powerful and meaningful. In itself, jaundiced in a way. For sure, we only see in others what is in ourself. A flaw...and perhaps also a positive honesty delveloping.... This is what writing should be, in my opinion -- Great read!
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Date: 6/29/2021 6:45:00 AM
Wonderful thought process especially in last stanza. I fully agree with you. All the best for contest.
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