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He Never Felt It

"He Never Felt It".

I walk lost
without my soul
I will find it
searching 
alone
he never 
felt it

Today I feel 
unnatural
   ugly
lost my beauty 
 I'll look 
weeping
he never 
felt it.

Now I am in need
of somebody
wipe away
one tear
out of billions
he never 
felt it.

Isolation from love
is slowing down
towards him
my depth got
sick lonely
he never 
felt it.

I searched why
explanation
was satisfactory
I am out 
of love
He never 
felt it.

Confusion without
 love
erupted
 in
tremendous
pain
attacked
my heart
he never
felt it.

Therese Bacha
24 June 2013

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Joanna Smith Date: 11/4/2013 5:58:00 PM Very touching poetry. The title pulled me in and I was not disappointed. Thankyou for this wonderful read. Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 7/29/2013 4:12:00 PM very nicely done Terry ;} you have a blessed day . Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/29/2013 6:33:00 PM Hi Terry; this is very touching and a gem of a poem. Thank you for sharing with us...... Lucilla Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/29/2013 9:34:00 PM Hi Lucy, thanks, see u tomorrow. hope better. Love Terry xoxo

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/28/2013 11:30:00 PM Hello Therese! This is marvelous as a poem, emotional, dynamic, touching! Hope you are fine! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/29/2013 9:35:00 PM Whoa, thank you my dear friend. I love your compliments, they encourage me to write. Take care. Love Terry xoxo

Donna Jones Date: 6/25/2013 6:13:00 PM Hello T.....this is very melancholy.... but I love it.. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/25/2013 6:29:00 PM Hi Donna, yes it was one of those days. But I am fine. Thank you so much. Love T. xoxo

Charmaine Chircop Date: 6/25/2013 3:15:00 PM Hi dear friend..We all have our ways of showing love differently.Many times we feel rejected by those we love most..They take us forgranted..Sometimes we just need to pour our emotions and feelings with those special someones xause manytimes they do not realize they are neglecting us.I read a book'men are from mars-women are from venus'and it describes so well the difference in the way a man and woman acts.I feel you a bit sad..Here s a big hug-Charma Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/25/2013 4:05:00 PM Hello my friend, Thank you for your beautiful message. I was in one of those moods. I am fine now. My love to princess. Hope you are doing good. Love Terry xoxo

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/24/2013 11:33:00 PM This is lovely but sad.....People are often insensitive when we most need it....hope you heal... Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/25/2013 4:03:00 PM Hi Eileen. I just in one of those moods. Much better today. Thank you so much for passing by. Love Terry xo

Michael Ainsley Date: 6/24/2013 9:54:00 PM From your beautiful mind to my soul Therese.So many of your poems touch me.And every time I see your picture on poerty soup I pause to send you a good thought.I was19 at Woodstock and I still beleave in people and flower power. Please read my poem Truth Is My Addiction. Thats how I move forward now that I am alone.Open heart Open Eye always. Be happy. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/25/2013 4:02:00 PM Thank you so much Michael, you are one of a kind, strong, tenacious. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. Hope you will always be happy. Stay strong. Life is beautiful. Love Terry xo

Russell Sivey Date: 6/24/2013 9:08:00 PM Wow Therese, you have progressed wonderfully into a very awesome poet my friend! I have been under the weather lately, some sort of lingering cold, so I have had a hard time responding to everyone's poetry! But I do get around to it, might not be right away though! Oh I'm also in school now, fun fun! It's for a creative writing degree with a specialization in poetry! I'm excited about it, and my first assignment is to write a poem based on summer! I've written it already, well, Great Work!! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/24/2013 9:27:00 PM Hello my dearest friend, so glad you are ok. Whoa a pupil again, its great for you, maybe one day we can read your poem. Good Luck my friend, stay healthy. Missed you. Love Terry xoxo