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He Loves You

I watched

as you pulled petals from a daisy 

trying to keep track
but soon lost your place

and as you frowned,

I handed you a bouquet of daisies
and whispered,

“He loves you”

lovefree verse

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/23/2017 8:07:00 PM

This is lovely and yes poetry even within brevity. Truly a beautiful and gentle sentiment. Well done

Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2017 8:26:00 AM

Thanks so very much Lisa for all of the kindness you show me.

Darren White

Date: 2/23/2017 6:50:00 PM

CHRIS! Sigh..... Wish I had written this little gem :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2017 8:26:00 AM

Thanks so much Darren. It's another compact poem. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/23/2017 6:21:00 PM

Chris, I felt touched while reading your poem.It made me feel comforted and warm. Well done. Hugs

Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2017 8:25:00 AM

I am happy my little poem touched you that way Darlene. Thank you so much.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/23/2017 5:34:00 PM

This is sweet, Chris:)

Chris Green
Date: 2/23/2017 5:37:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/23/2017 5:28:00 PM

Hi Chris, What a romantic scene you created. A without doubt seven:-)Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 2/23/2017 5:31:00 PM

Hey there my sweet friend, thanks for stopping by. :) I am happy you liked this one Alexis.

Tim Smith

Date: 2/23/2017 5:26:00 PM

Quite the romantic gesture.

Chris Green
Date: 2/23/2017 5:31:00 PM

Thanks so much Tim.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/23/2017 4:16:00 PM

And then Im sure She handed you just one little flower-The forget-me -not flower,and whispered 'Forget-you-not' :).I really loved the innocence in your poem.Used to love playing that game as a girl..Nostalgia,memories,and sweetness..all filled my soul with this beauty...Aw....very romantic...A fave.

Chris Green
Date: 2/23/2017 4:44:00 PM

Thank you so very much Charmaine. I am happy you liked this one and I loved the forget me not thought, that was beautiful. :)