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Poetry/Free Verse/He Loved That I Was A Poet
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1575-921-02
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written September 02, 2023
For the International Contest, Would You Love Me If I Wasn't  A Poet
sponsor, Silent One. Judged 09/13/2023

Second Place

He Loved That I Was a Poet

 
I met him in a cafe one cold winter day as I was absorbed in writing a poem I realized a man watching me a handsome man and my world began to spin out of control time stood still I did not know that we were about to set sail when he came over I could almost not speak but when we began I could not stop he wanted to know what I was writing a poem, I said and read it to him and that was the beginning days, became weeks and months we spent a lot of time together and he loved when I read my poetry to him I asked, would you love me still if I was not a poet? he would smile, of course, but I love your words the promise between us was a delicate flower blooming his touch was like music to my soul the drum of time rolled and then we married and I promised to love him for a thousand years love is a fragile seed that one must treasure but God took my beloved away and the seed withered I drown in the dregs of yesterday's sorrow and among the pages of my poetry that I read to him I folded my wings and waited part of me wanted to destroy those pages until, I heard his voice one night whispering I love you, and I love that you are a poet it is your destiny, so write, write for the world to read and I will hear your poetry all the way up here in heaven I will watch over you every single day and I am waiting for love is a journey that never dies
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September 13, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Great poetic storytelling.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement.
La France Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:37 PM
Silent, thank you.
One Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Great poetic storytelling.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement.
La France Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:37 PM
Silent, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations.
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 4:12 AM
awww, such a touching & tender write, my friend. I hope your eyes are feeling much better by now x
La France Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Jack, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, all better now
Jayasankar Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Aw dear Constance... such a heartfelt write, the last few lines touched me so much... Hope you are doing good my friend... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
La France Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:19 AM
Ani, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, hugs
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:36 AM
Nice love story From the beginning to the End. He just loved you before he knew about your poetic pen. He was starring ... Only him could witness what he saw on that first day... and ended up losing control.
La France Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:19 AM
Alfonso, thank you so much for the comment and compliment
Empress Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 4:48 AM
“The promise between us was a delicate flower” ah how beautiful is that line. Another excellent story. You are one of those that can tell stories in such a seamless poetic manner that would never bore the readers. And this one is another excellent one that i truly enjoyed reading. The ending made me tear up, to lose ones beloved and those heartfelt words at the end truly is soul hitting: loveeee this! a winner definitely: goodluck for the contest. cant help but cry , this story is a fave
La France Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:20 AM
Ink, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and FAV
Edmonds  Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 4:42 PM
That was a lovely beginning Constance, a beautiful poem, music and dance too… Belle
La France Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 4:51 PM
Belle, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate, blessings !
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